Long ago, before the rise of Discord, before the fall of Luna, Princess Celestia banished an evil fire demon to the farthest realms of the astral heavens. He swore his revenge, yet Celestia, still young, failed to heed it. Now, he is back to exact his revenge upon all pony kind. Not a direct continuation of The Greatest Adventure, but takes place in the same story line. This story will include violence, but if you're looking for some mane 6 adventure involving an ifrit (fire jinn), this is the story for you.
Chapters (3)
So far, so good. A lot less action than I would've liked, though. I'm looking forward to some fight scenes in the near future. A couple grammatical errors, but otherwise I like it. I think that it will continue to develop and improve given time and the chance to work in some action. :)
607217 Well, I was hoping to get to the fights in the next chapter, but life outside of cyberspace has prevented that. Now that I'm off for Summer vaycay, I can hopefully get this started back up. Then again, it'll be have after my assignment for Ty. Gotta a project due for him by the 11th.