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cellum95


World of Tanks player(ironically same as my username here), FimFiction author and viewers, WarThunder player(still the same username) and etc.

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Pinkie Pie, The Element of Laughter, is a supernatural pony. Her Pinkie Sense could detect what would happen on the very near-future, and rarely could see and hear ponies far and wide, even to the universe itself. However, she had nightmares of 3 bipedal creatures on her dream that she must embrace her past, and will come to her later.

Meanwhile, Thor and Loki, with an order from their father, Odin, they must help the poor creature in the realm of 'Xeanoporhia' to help her to understand what she is, an Asgard.
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Note: This is like a crossover of Thor: The Dark World. This is inspired by this movie and a story here also in FimFiction.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

Well then, this is interesting!

There are some grammar mistakes here and there that sometimes makes it hard to follow but either then that, its an interesting idea.

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either then that

Other than that

Umm... Asgard is a place, not a race. The inhabitants are Asgardians, and they come from either the Aesir clan, like Odin and Frigga, or the Vanir clan lke Freyja and her brother Frey...

3463248 I'll keep that in mind.

Pinkie as a descendant of the Aesir!? Do go on. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

3463285 You mean Asgard. And yes. However, I need an Asgardian name of the first predecessor of Pinkie. Do need help thought.

"Hmmm" Rainbow pondered.

"I'm being chased by three dragons that I can't take down on my own..."

*GASP*

"I've got it!!" she realised.

"The cutie mark crusaders will save me!!"
Me - :ajbemused:

3468053 Oh well, time to revise the last chapter. :P

3468091 I'm revising the chapter for some good measures, you know, because the original one is like being rushed something like that.

This story felt awkward as hell. Everything went too fast, and everyone just seemed to roll with it. They just learned some seriously epic and mind blowing news, and they just seem to be okay with it. The idea is good, but the way you went about telling it wasn't very good.
Random moustache! :moustache:

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