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cellum95


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It was just a normal day for Twilight, Pinkie and Octavia. But when they are gathered because of an exciting find, they got a surprise that the find will grant them the powers of anypony ever realize.

The power of a Soul Reaper
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Bleach Crossover

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 56 )

Will any human soul reapers appear?

3593995 Uhm......I don't know yet. In fact, if any of the HSR(Human Soul Reapers) would appear in Equestria, then there must be a Human Tag right now. Regardless, I need to think about it.

3625274 sorry I didn't explain I'm a huge fan of bleach and I want u to continue

Pinkie's Bankai should be a Cannon...it would shoot random things out of it.

Octavia can be a Bard.

And Twi could have a staff and be an ÃŒber Battle-Mage.

3627259 LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL XD:rainbowlaugh:

3627265 I can't get the image of Pinkie, wearing Arrancar robes, with a huge cannon that fires Hot Pink, Kamehameha-size Ceros:pinkiehappy:

pinkie threatening dash was a bit out of the blue but i can accept it. please don't make dash end up whatever you calssify chad as. thats more AJ's thing.

3639561 I'm gonna get that in mind. Don't worry though, RD will not be killed.

While this is very good, you need to use proper grammar and use of words, as well as add missing words. There a lot of mistakes like that.

"How did you here?" Octavia asked.

Stuff like that. Otherwise, it's a good story mate. :pinkiesmile:

3640622 Thanks for pinpointing that!

Can't wait for Hollows:pinkiecrazy:

3642594 Reason for funny: :pinkiehappy:
Reason for boring::twilightoops:
Reason I favorited: Octavia

3650886 XD Your request is granted

hoolows now, any chance we'll see a quincy?

if thats there zanpukto i can't wait to see them release benkai.

3667336 XD Sometimes people don't use the word Bankai to their you-know-what. For example, Espada number 6(Nnoitra). "Pray, Santa Teresa!"

3667377 yes but the form itself is benkai there releasing the hold on there power there releasing benkai, technicaly zanpukto is the sword all reapers use. don't take this as criticism your story is still all kinds of good. some might say more engaging then the opener of bleach.

3626357
i just read this and you do not credit me as the giver of these zanpaktos!

3688911 Hm.....Maybe in the credits chapter I will....

'Read's the author's note'

That doesn't matter, I'm happy to wait for a story this good:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I suggest you use rukia's shikai and bankai for Twilight, Bykuya's shikai and bankai for Octavia, and ichigo's for Pinkie and if your wondering why i suggesting ichigo's for pinkie it's just cause

Pinkie pies makes sense but if rainbow dash gets Quincy powers I will go and hit my head into a tree

*goes and hits head against tree* me: FUCK MY LIVE!!!!

I will bet that ether sombra, one of wonder bolts, or maud be a Quincy

*goes to comic con and buys a zanpukto from the merchant and gets teleported to equestria*

Slightly surprised their not anthro normally would be with weapon related powers congrats for trying something new

Why use already existing shikai's and bankai's? Each one is different and if your pulling there the same zanpakuto's from bleach then I'm sure they wouldn't have shikai or bankai

sompony that is a Soul Reaper

shinigami

the Soul Reapers will come to their aid and will kill the one who disrupted it.

unless izen's betrayal happened here I think you need to redo this sentence

Another trait is that Soul Reapers have an ability known as Flash Step."

shunpo not a trait technically

Flash Step is a special ability wherein ponies would go one distance to another, much like a teleportation spell, but without any magic.

shunpo increasing your normal speed by applying reastiu to your feet and or limbs that makes it appear as if you teleported hence when translated to English is flash step

Zanpakuto is a very powerful trait.

do I need to explain?

"Melody, Yugana Gakki."

how

Light, Maho no Shokuin Boredo

how

Unpredictable, Ima made no buki o henkō suru

this isn't possible they haven't even communicated with their zanpakuto's yet they need their spirts to tell them their names or they can't use shiki and if they use bankai next chapter this is officially impossible

The new Soul Reapers, Twilight, Pinkie and Octavia, when they got to their old forms,

fat chance when they didn't even go out of their bodies their stuck in shinigami form now

"Exactly. Now, let us go home." Twilight said as she, Pinkie and Octavia uses their Flash Steps to go back home.

which ones trips and hits something

kido spells

since when we're they spells

These kinds of spells are very unique, because they don't require normal unicorn horns. Also, they could be use against an enemy."

and they can literally steal the soul of your enemy unspoken hado 0 and oh you use everything's English name but you still use kido's Japanese name

"It was a spell,

wrong wrong wrong

it was a binding spell

I'm pretty sure it was more hado attack, last I checked restrict spells don't shoot your opponent away from you

it wasn't a normal pony. It was a very big one, and it's coat was white.

so either it's an arrancar or its a need to be edited hollow who needs his black skin like coat and white mask

3650886 that's not a hollow if it is it's at most an arrancar last I checked hollows had masks and were fully pitch black

3667377 because that's not bankai that's resurrection and espada are the arrancars not shinigami's

*stacks papers sighing, in a captains uniform zanpakuto on back* I can count so many errors here it makes me want to slice you in two with half my mind on the trigger which is somewhat normal for a previous squad 11 captain but I'm more sensible I'm going to wait and see where it goes now go bye see you next chapter

That my dear, is a magic beam that will grant you non-pony powers.

soooo ponies don't have a soul?

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