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Vamponies (and other supernatural creatures)1,115 stories ·2,765 members

ponystein

a dark and stormy night, a mad scientist moves about in the Everfree, his intentions ill and his methods questionable. his only intention, to create an artificial Alicorn...
A story long since brewing in my mind now fleshed out
Coauthored with Stallord25

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Antojo Pony

Antojo Pony #1 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

Not bad. A couple of formatting and grammar errors and the big blocks of text as a result of forgetting the space between paragraphs.

Though I'm wondering if you are going with the classic Hollywood Frankenstein's monster archetype or with the monster from the Mary Shelly's original novel?

Lunar_RnD

Lunar_RnD #2 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

3482002
Mary Shelly's novel Frankenstein, not the hollywood, but we will incorporate some of those elements into it

Antojo Pony

Antojo Pony #3 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

3482008
I always did prefer the original version, the creature (I don't view him as a monster) had more personality and surprising in my opinion was one of the most human character in the novel.

I had a similar idea for a while about Twilight creating and artificial alicorn but never got around to it. Anyways I wish you luck in this endeavor whether be affectionate parody or dark comedy.