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This is great! Not gonna digress now; must read on!!
MY ONLY WEAKNESS! How did you know?
Hot for teacher. :Cheerileehawt:
25597 Cheerilee = hawtest mare there. I'd tap that - if I were a pony, of course.
“Twilight, are you...chewing on my hair?”
Abort! Abort!
LMAO
That's some sexy poetry, Cheerilee needs to get books on tape to play in the bedroom during. . . intimate sessions . Twilight would pass out from her high. Eheheheheh
Also, is it strange that I'm imagining role playing in the future? <(Twilight, you've been a very bad girl) (Please, Miss Cheerilee, I'd do anything for an A. . . )> Oh, sweet Celestia. Just think about all of Twilight's strange princess fantasies coming true.
and twi was like:
IMMA FIRIN MA LAZUUUUR!
For some reason the end reminded me of the Van Halen song that's sitting on my playlist How do I know when it's love? I can't tell you but it lasts forever...
*reading this after latest episode*
... You future-telling thing, you...
"She vaguely comprehends hopping up a set of stars, following" -
Messed up some italics.
Dear lord, all others before were just prelude. Your clop-fu is strongest when there's affection AND love between them both. Only her encounter with Rarity comes close to this chapter in my opinion. Bravo! What would you call this ship? Cheerilight? Twilee? In any case, you've got me hooked!
Is this love
that I'm feeling?
Is this the love
That I've been searching for?
I have not read this yet, but just by the title, I know something super sexy is going to happen
Edit after reading: 3 hearts should do the trick!
NO FREAKIN WAY!? Dude, you're a genius. Well, I haven't read on obviously... but Twilight and Cheeriee? Thats so awesome.
I've never even thought of that a good good shipping pair, for some reason. They're both intelligent schollars, both purple (lol), and the way you characterize Cheerilee in this is just awsome!
and also,
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Enjoyed the conversations like the last time, (about my favorite thing hehe) and the horngasm unsettled/annoyed me like before as well xP Overdone imo. (but that's just because I dislike them on principle in general)
Anyhow, shorter than usual (my comment) as I am a bit woozy and got lots of stuff to do. Loved the passion(?) and emotions in the sex scene though.
Was that a... how should i spell it? Hornjob?
Yesss, moar hate on Luna. BURN, LUNA! You're lucky you don't have an emote. Im watching you...
Huh I have a bad feeling about this, good thing this story is already finished, as I can almost sense what is going to happen next.
Damn. Hell of a first date.
Your writing's emotional resonance continues to be quite powerful. I really feel what Twilight's feeling instead of simply understanding; that's a big success in a first-person or third-person-limited narrative.
And still so many questions...
Got about a quarter way through it. Twilight confirmed for Professional Sexual predator.
This is the most confusing turned-on I've ever been. > I guess Twilight has the weirdest Boner-equivalent?
Edit. Twilight still confirmed for sexual predator. MATCH_FOUND: 1. Cherilee-Confirmed for hypnotist, Cougar/rapist. Pairing likeleyhood: 69%
On a less rapey note, I loved this chapter. I finally think I see where this is going, after like, 8 chapters!
63533 You are hereby Redeemed of my wrath.
I've already read this twice before, but I simply must say it. Chapters like this one are what make this story my favourite ponyfic. This chapter is Passion. Pure, unbridled passion in the most romantic way. It makes other shipfics seem clunky in comparison.
> Cheerilee's mouth makes an O of surprise. Her eyes light up. "Braeburn?
You're missing a quote at the end of the sentence.
Mares can have whyboners too?
For the hornjob scene, this little ditty seems oddly appropriate:
Again, Dat Ending...awww.
Oh god my perverted sick mind. The moment I saw the words Abort! I thought of the Abort scene in Austin Powers.
And on a less comical note, great chapter, I love where this is going, GO CHEERTWI!!!
I've been enjoying this thoroughly for some time, and a big part of it is your flair for describing not just action and dialogue, but THOUGHT.
All of this is just so painfully, perfectly accurate, and it's amazing. That last line in particular is just so spot-on, and it's something so very few writers manage to capture.
You kinda shifted tenses at the end of this sentence and it threw me a bit. Should be "means every word" shouldn't it?
Well, now I'm looking forward to reading about Applejack's parents. I always enjoy reading about a character's past and their family.
Somepony is still sore about the love poison incident. Somepony is blaming the victims.
What's the standard punishment for lying in this classroom?
Is this how you haunt Twilight now? Eating into the time she has for her date? Seems like rather a step down from mocking her from within her subconscious.
I don't think I can work with this one like I did with "back in the saddle." Polo: it's a thing that can be learned, which is probably associated with the upper class. It may also bear other resemblances with Earth polo. Or it may not. That's all I've got.
If this is your version of "best behavior," you should probably just wait outside. You're not helping.
You're still in the classroom; a student could come bursting back through that door at any time because of one last thing they forgot. I want to see that tail touching the ground, missy.
One of the lesser-known disadvantages of immortality: it encourages procrastination. There is always more time. Tia could mope over a bad breakup until there was no living pony besides herself and Luna who knew that she used to be different, if she wanted to. What's to stop her? She's not getting any less young and beautiful.
I feel sorry for these nameless teachers. Equestria is supposed to be the land of opportunity, where the opportunity in question is to do something you love. But not all cutie marks pay . . .
Precisely what you said. It's not like you didn't already tell her once.
She's met you.
Well, that last poem was fairly dirty.
Yeah, good poetry is pretty sweet.
You'd be pretty much just as thoroughly in new territory if you had my taste, though. I may be able to recite "The Tyger" by heart, but I can't imagine the proper moment to do so would be very likely to come up on a date. For example.
. . . Did you ever read FoE: Project Horizons? Do you remember when Blackjack started thinking of poetry while fighting? I was so pissed about the way she was mangling one of my favorite poems, I forgot to notice how little sense it made for her character. Good times, good times (by which I mean soul-crushing).
I do what I want! I'm the bloody
DerpySparkle!When is Paleo going to release Doctor Whooves and the Mare in the Moon, incidentally? He promised summer, and there's less than a month left of that.
Oh, so not everypony just magically knows how this works? Just Twilight, I suppose?
Oh, yeah, uh . . . I guess I take it back. Take it back so hard that for once, I actually mention it.
I'm supposed to assume that for the purposes of sex, a horn works almost exactly like a penis, am I not? That's how it's supposed to make sense that Cheerilee was so suddenly skilled? Well, I don't want to.
Horngasms... winggasms... Such a completely ridiculous notion, yet here you are, making them work.
Also, the importance of foreplay! Whoo, what a chapter!
*9 More Chapters*
Somehow, I have a feeling something will go wrong
Fun fact: a horn-gasm releases potent reproductive cells, much like a male ejaculation. This makes a female unicorn able to impregnate another female. Usually the horn is protected with a type of condom during hornal-vaginal stimulation, commonly referred to as 'horning'.
No glove, no love, right?
I can't believe I keep forgetting that getting flowers for ponies is like flowers and a box of chocolates in one.