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"Deal with it"
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You know what's the mark of a good author?
When they keep dangling something in front of your face and you JUST WANT TO KNOW what it IS!
At this moment. I'm 50/50 whether Applejack is keeping Mac off limits whether it turns out he's gay or she's into her own brother.
Now THAT would be impressively bold.
You know what's the mark of a good author?
When they keep dangling something in front of your face and you JUST WANT TO KNOW what it IS!
At this moment. I'm 50/50 whether Applejack is keeping Mac off limits whether it turns out he's gay or she's into her own brother.
Now THAT would be impressively bold.
Seriously loving this, agree with the comment above. Plus Carl (Colt) Sagan quote? Awesome!
I bet I could cure cancer if I could just figure out a way to bottle that backside...
YOU ROCK!
I would purposefully get cancer just to recieve that as medicine.
The mere fact that Cheerilee is becoming a major role in this has me happier than you'd know.
She's my favorite background character!
>>CommandoDude (guest)
ah come on... are you some kind of retard?
whether it turns out he's gay --> he fucking couldn't take his eyes off raritys flank. it's not something straight to do for a man?
she's into her own brother --> go read some princess molestia to cool down your creepy thoughts o0
63424 L'n'T Bronies, L'n'T...
well, maybe he's no perfect 9 or whatever.. of no significance either way.
And you can find all forms of inclinations in stories here.
So long as there is not tag for it, you can not rule anything out.
But I don't think any of that is gonna happen. I assume she just can't handle the mental image of her brother getting laid so she makes it a point to prevent it from happening. (IRL often found with brothers screening off their sisters. But hay, this is AJ we're talking about. )
Cherilee! Finally a character that makes some sense! I dunno if it's the way I've been educated or my circle of friends, but we don't jump into eachothers pants at every occasion we get. Thank you for making some kind of "normal" relationship
"Cheerilee says, louder now, apparently forgetting her shame from before." - Double space
HRH,
Princess Celestia
^ What does "HRH" mean?
"THAT is how you cure heartbreak. Shoot, that is how you cure ANYTHING. I bet I could cure cancer if I could just figure out a way to bottle that backside... "
This line is Gold!
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Her Royal Highness.
16132 .......I NEED TO KNNOW WHAT THE FUCK YOU ARE DANGLING IN FRONT OF MY FACE AUTHER!!!!!!!
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I can't stop reading!
You know, I called this happening way back when she first talked to Cheerilee... and said out loud: "I approve of this... I approve of this greatly. Twilight - Cheerilee shipping is a good thing." I then proceeded to nod ever-so-smartly.
Haven't even finished the chapter, yet. I'm at the party.
"
Am I doing this? I think I am.
She gets up and starts making her way over.
The wild Twilight Sparkle catches sight of her prey and stalks in for the kill.
"
That made me laugh, and also made me suddenly feel like this won't end well.
I never consciously thought about it, but somehow I knew that the Twilight/Cheerilee thing would happen. Somehow. It's weird. I was reading this chapter, watching Twilight attempt to rebound from Luna and suddenly there's Cheerilee and--
DUH.
Brilliant. You were planning this from the beginning, weren't you? You magnificent bastard, you.
"But then I had the best, bestest, best idea ever! This is a SECRET party!"
Why does when ever Pinkie Pie say something like that in a fan fic, I always imagine it as Cabooses voice from Red vs Blue?
16131 gay makes no sense, what do gay guys just ogle women all the time now?
Was going to wait until I reached the end before I left any comments, but I was just so pleased with the Cheerilee thing I couldn't resist. The foreshadowing for it was just perfect. She had been showing up in every other chapter or so since the beginning, and the little hints each time just added up. I am awed by the sense of timing with which it was all implemented, and when Cheerilee sat down next to Twilight at the bar I made a funny little "squee" noise.
...And my guess on the deal with Big Mac (I promise I'm not reading ahead) is that we're being set up for some FlutterMac. AJ is running interference so that he's available when Fluttershy eventually works up the courage to say something.
I'm really glad someone recommended this one to me. I'm having a blast reading it.
A few things that crossed my mind (none of which criticize)
862663 Goddamnit. Now I'm forced to hear it like that. Lol.
Whenever I see foalish, I know it means foolish, but I think childish.
Also, Twi/Cheerilee? SO CALLED IT!
God damn, I know that feeling.
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It's your circle of friends.
It may also be lots of other people's circles of friends...
but it's not everybody's.
Also the only pairings within the mane six here are TS/RD, TS/RA, and RD/RA, all of which took place in single incidents, and RD/PP, which is offscreen and ongoing. Hardly everypony jumping everypony any chance they get. Applejack doesn't even like mares, and neither she nor Fluttershy has dated anypony ever.
COLT SAGAN for the win
862772 Ask your dad about that one!t - Sorry, you kinda set that one up for me!
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Glad I'm not the only one caught up in the foreshadowing.
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>Uses the word 'F*ck'
>Can't properly link replies
>Recommends something with the name Molestia in it
Yeah, that other guy's the retard. Not hatin', just statin'!
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Hell yea! Although............. I can't stop thinking about her and Rarity....... I'm still kinda hoping those two wind up with each other in the end. Wait..... that's what other stories are for... Nevermind! I guess they will allways have the night where Twilight made Rarity lose her virginity.
Gee, if only there was some kind of fun gathering where single ponies could be found.
maybe match.com?
"Oh!" Cheerilee jolts in surprise, then smiles. ""You" read Colt Sagan? I just adore his work."
I don't why, but no matter how hard I try, I can only read this in Rariy's voice.
I have to say that this line has such a brilliantly subtle double meaning (Yeah, Twilight was a mess. You picked her up in more ways than one, you sly devil you) I'm not even sure whether you meant it that way. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume you did, though.
Seriously, Twilight? You're that slow?
My gosh, Twilight, you are super smart, yet you are THAT slow? Kind of cute to say the least. I can't wait to keep on reading this pretty amazing story.
No legs, you see.
Hint, hint.
Please hold while I consider this phrase . . .
I guess it's an idiom specifically about dating. The metaphorical (and sometimes also real) saddle is what a mare wears to look nice to reenter the dating pool after a nasty breakup. Not as widely applicable as our idiom, but still entirely appropriate to the situation.
Now, when talking about a stallion, the phrase means something entirely different . . .
. . . Have I never before considered the fact that Twilight got dressed up for her first Ponyville Winter Wrap-Up, but then decided to attend naked after she realized she was up way too early? Was it precisely important enough to warrant wearing something nice if and only if it was too cold to wear nothing? Or did somepony stop her when she was leaving the library to point out that if she earned a vest, she wouldn't be able to wear it over a saddle? For that matter, how could hyper-organized Twilight not bother to figure out in advance which team she'd be on, even though everypony else showed up already vested up and everything? Rarity probably insisted on tailoring each vest to fit its wearer; how could she have failed to notice she wasn't making one for one of her best friends?
Well, you are developing a reputation.
For being on the dating scene (most ponies assumed you were only attracted to books before). Why, what sort of reputation did you think I meant?
It's like you read my mind, Twilight.
Yes, Dash, your dream has come true. Try not to be so surprised you screw it up.
That's not what YOUR MOM said last night!
I'm sorry, I don't know how he got out. But he was vaguely headed in the right direction; that isn't what you said the other night (not that Twi caught on).
Did I give up yet? Because if not, I'm doing that now.
It'll be a wonder if Twilight manages to learn anything in this story; she's only got another ten chapters to work with after this one.
Okay, a) when did she say that she was ready to be completely open about not being a nine, because I don't think I was invited, and b) if you were actually that irresistible to every mare who isn't a nine, you'd be having a threesome with Luna and Dash right now.
Kinky.
Remember when you were having fun?
You shouldn't give up so quickly, though. The Rule of Three demands that you collect another rejection before the night is out. Tick tock, Twilight!
Question: is using a love poison to ship two ponies against their orientations more unethical than shipping ponies merely against their wills, but in line with their orientations?
Take her like Braeburn! You totally want to repeat that whole debacle!
Cheerilee, get out. Now. I don't want to see you chasing after Twi anymore.
Either you know basically nothing about Twilight, or you are deliberately manufacturing a "coincidence" to gain her trust. Either way, I don't like your motivations. I protect my little ponies, even when I am annoyed at their behavior.
See?
And this is suggestive that it's the second option. I might have forgiven you the first, given the right circumstances. Not so the second.
Twi, either put your tail back in your metaphorical pants, leave the party, or at the very least charge all the hottest single ponies in Ponyville for the show you're going to give them.
Hey, incidentally, does Lyra keep her tail in her pants in public, or does she just not care who sees her body language?
Do teenage mares sometimes wear heavy skirts to make sure that nopony can tell when they start fantasizing about some jock or whatever?
Focus, Sparkle. Dating now, unethical experiments later. First marry her, then use a mostly forgotten legal technicality to make her your property, and then it will be the proper time to try to stuff her in a bottle.
Translation:
"When next week would be a good time for me to stop by and make sure my idiot sister didn't ruin everything?"
I wish it hadn't taken me so long to figure out "put your tail back in your metaphorical pants." It's hardly the best idiom I've ever tried to invent, but it's way better than what I was using on earlier chapters. That was all pretty forced.
And this is when this story breaks away from your standard shipping tale. I've even fallen into this pit myself. No wonder everyone likes this.
Also it's about damn time she hooked up with Cheerilee, I've been waiting for that forever. :V
I... I don't know what to feel right now. I'm a massive Twiluna shipper, I love Cheerilight, I'm pissed off at Luna for doing what she's doing, I want to make her just kiss the damn girl, I want Twilight and Cheerilee to end up happily ever after, I don't know if Luna's trying to teach her a lesson, being a bitch, or is just as confused as Twilight...
It's actually kind of funny. He he. Ha ha. Hahahahaha. HAHAHAHAHAHA!
BOOKGASM!!! 0_o
I think Celly has a "crush" on Twiley!
Woooo! Go Twilight, gettin some o dat Cherilee!
What is more to love than love itself?
This chapter is exeptional.
WOW. This chapter was amazing. I especially like how Twilight doesn't immediately, after dancing with Cheerilee, think that she's in love again. that would be too rushed. But this was SOOOOOO well written and SUCH a great plot (pun intended) !!!
I was gonna offer props on the sneaky Carl Sagan quote. Then I read farther and realized it wasn't sneaky, you were just saving the drop for later. Note to self: read first, THEN comment.
But props anyway :)
God, I love this story just as much as I love The Venture Bros.