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damn you man tears
I cry, not because I'm a baby, but because I Care!
Stupid Twi, Stupid!
Good characterizations, though. gotta commend you on correct characterization.
Curse you sir! Curse you! A clopfic bringing me to tears!? What sorcery is this!
No...no this is much more. If anything, it's a romantic adventure. It's truly far beyond any stereotypical genre. I warn you though; If I spent hours upon hours reading your story, and for it not to have a happy ending... I don't know what I'd do.
Guess we'll have to find out! :P
EVERY F*CKING TIME!!! Why is it in almost EVERY Twilight shipping fic that for a pony with her smarts she ends up screwing it up?
P.S.
all the way
Twilight. . . Goddamnit, Twilight ! Why do you gotta go and buck it up like this! ? You had something ! You had something there!. . .
GO AND SPILL YOUR HEART OUT TO HER, SHE'S WAITING FOR YOU!!!!!!!! MAKE UP WITH EACH OTHER AND HAVE HOT STEAMY MAKE UP SEX!!!! NOW!!!!! SAVE YOUR RELATIONSHIP, DAMNIT!!!!!!
''Twilight face palms silently.''
I wanna see you facepalming without fingers :P
there is a good neologism for it: face hoofing.
Hmm.
This may be derogatory, but I find myself unwillingly becoming yet more steadfast in my own personal decisions on this subject.
The scenarios proposed are full and intricate, belaying the fast and delicate dance -where all of us stumble- fleetingly successful.
Yet consequences to not abide hopes projected by our whims, in the end: "shit is complicated."
So I will read further along, anticipating what you have stealthily foreshadowed and expecting, Neigh, demanding that it does not infact come to pass.
That ye actually have a surprise, a twist which not I can imagine.
pinkie pie you so smart
'“I…uh…are you and Cheerilee getting a divorce?”'
That made me facepalm and laugh at the same time.
Dangit, Twilight, why do you have to make such cliche, unresearched mistakes... Any good source will tell you that the spark fades...
"Twilight face palms silently." -
manly tears. only because ive had this exact same experience...
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Wow, there's Pinkie pie's insanely sane and logical logic for ya. Thanks Sleepless, you cleared up a question I've wondered on for so long.
I KNEW IT!
....
*sniffle*
Dunno if you read the review, but eh, I like to write stuff xP
Will be a short one this time, can firstly say like before, I really like the whole emotional thing going on with her doubting herself. And secondly, with the comment to AJ at the bar, Mac should be referred to as a "slut" as well. Depending how he went on about it, and for how it was described, he was a slut, just sleeping around. (if the rumors were true as said) Anyhow, also love Pinkie's "logic" in this.
Wha... Wait. wait. WAIT.
I've red this story so far over the past few days... And now its obious.
Its not a simple clopfic with a stupid excuse-plot, its actually a very well written romance that deals with real problems and gives insight in some parts of the very nature of relationships!
Its a trick! Now I actually thought about that topic myself, and I think I learned something from it!
Dammit you...
I knew it.
I knew it as soon as I read the title.
Twi? FIX IT!
... so, only part of an explanation about Big Macintosh, and Twilight's relationship with Cheerilee is all fucked up now?
If you weren't so damn good at writing I might actually stop here. As it is, I'm putting a lot of faith in you to fix this.
TWILIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET CHEERILEE BACK, DARNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twilight, if you don't wield Pinkie's sage advice like a sword and swiftly slay the gap that's steadily building between you and your lover, I will bucking throttle you. I mean it, missy.
Oh.
My.
Alicorn.
Sisters.
How I wish I would've read this long ago. Especially the perfect muffin part, that would have saved me so much heartache as a teen...
... Wait, Pinkie is being the voice of reason?
A time machine in the basement? Where would you get such an idea?
OH GOD NO! Twilight, you must fix this travesty! You have been enlightened, now go show that mare that you're no longer confused. Bring the LOVE!
Celestia, I am good at saving my complaints until the last possible moment. Which is, of course, also the ideal moment, since it's always a sawtooth sort of thing.
Yeah, you seemed so into it.
I'm hurt! Why wasn't I invited to the wedding?
Or are you just practicing for when you are an old married couple?
Yes, in part. It's just not her you should be asking about that issue.
Also, "then." "Than" is for comparisons.
Because the routine is dumb, and you're dumb for believing in it.
I mean, really.
Copycat. That's my joke.
If you only knew what was to come . . .
Yeah, isn't that backwards? Not that I've ever personally dealt with that little linguistic vortex.
Cute.
Not like before, though. This time she'll dump you because she doesn't want to get you in bed.
Admit it. You are perfectly aware that Pinkie's talk about cupcakes has been far more edifying than wandering around brooding ever would be.
Timing!
You should go to her. Apologize, profess your love, beg her to come back, all that. You need to show her you care, after all. That said, I don't think tonight is the right time. If she wants space, right now is too soon to violate that.
Of course, you're not going to get the perfect moment you were aiming for. You've irrevocably lost the appearance of full initiative; you can't make it look like you aren't reacting to her leaving. Not in the short term, anyway. You've got several witnesses to back you up, given time to call them to the stand, but that only matters if Cheerilee is dubious enough that you need to prove that you're not just afraid of being alone, yet not so dubious that you never get the chance.
The time spell was one use only.
I've forgotten my complaint. I know I had one planned, so it would be wrong of me to use another one, but I can't seem to recall what it was.
Ah, yes. This story is a trap. At least, it is for me. It's not properly fulfilling my desire for pony, and yet, thanks to Gardez, I have to read it all. Which means it's taking up time I could be using for fulfilling my desire for pony.
This is the most important chapter of a fanfic tagged Romance I have ever read.
What did you do? How did you do this? How did you crawl inside people's heads and take a direct transcription of their inner monologue? More importantly, just what dark demonic powers are you consorting with?
You...you...
YOU!! YOU MADE THIS HAPPEN!!
Oh you're on my hitlist now motherfucker.
Goddammit...... now I'm sad.... Why is it always romance that makes me feel this way?!
Damnit, i hate it when im right...
This chapter was well written. Only somehow it seems unlikely to me this kind of breakup happens after sexy time. Especialy when Cheerilee seems so fallen for Twilight. This would suggest that this disfunction has been around the two for longer than today, but it was not apparent.
On another note, in this chapter the flashbacks and what i think are twilight's thoughts possible outcomes were a bit less distinguisable from the actual narative. But perhaps this is my un-nativeness from english speaking.
~stjonal
I think a part of me just died
Damn...my aches for Twi in this chapter. She finally figures out that real love is like the best cupcake you ever had day in and day out. After a while you loose that "OMG best ever" feel, but can't imagine your life without it.
Damn it this "clop fic" is making me cry a little. Like and fave.
Makes you wonder if Pinkie has had more experiences with love than we thought. I love Pinkie giving random bits of wisdom dressed up in funny ways so it works even just as that but I do feel like that her knowledge of this may have some actual experience to it. Did Pinkie have somebody before she started "dating" Rainbow Dash?
Makes me really wish that Sleepless did a story about Pinkie. I know she is a hard character for him to write but he writes her so well and her few scenes are among his best in the series.
i feel like making a joke abou tblowing into a balloon to inflate it, but thatvseems far too obvious
the fandom knows fluttershy prefers a certain chaotic noodle to cupcakes