• Published 27th Oct 2013
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Could be for... - Fat1thatyoulove

The sequel to the Might Be series, part 52. Follow our main character thought his newest trails as he tries to better understand the consequences of his influences on Equestria; and how it affects the ones he loves.

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Chapter 6

Chapter 6

The day has rolled on and it's been now about an hour since Sparky left and Violet's mind has completely forgotten about the lose of the cloud in the jar and she's been able to divert some of her urges. Instead her thought have shifted to the book that sits in front of her from where she lays in the bed.

...Some items have their own magical field, and these items can not be simply duplicated like normal times. Lucky though-...

Violet's silent reading is brought to an end as a voice to her room flicks her head, "Psst..."

The young mare blinks to the light orange pegasus at the window as she slowly moves the book aside.

Sparky cautiously looks around the room for a moment as he holds his voice down, "I know I dropped that jar when your dad came in...So I brought you a different one." As his words end the stallion moves out of sight for a moment as a slightly large bright white cloud comes into view.

A faint wheezing laugh comes up from Violet as she trots over towards the window, Sparky moves the cloud a little as he blinks to her laugh, "What? Is it the wrong kind?" He looks over the cloud as Violet shakes her head and starts her hooves up.

The stallion cracks a slight smile to the comment as he speaks up, "No, I didn't expect you to keep the whole thing. I figured this way you could pick the piece you want." He rubs his neck with his hoof as he shrugs, "I would have just taken you cloud walking if you wanted, but I don't know how sick you are."

Violet doesn't correct his statement as she just nods her head and sparks her horn up, piece of the white fluff gets pulled from the cloud but just begins to float through her magic. Lucky She's able to bring her hoof to it as she catches it.

"Oh, here you go..." Sparky's hoof comes up as he holds out a new jar.

A new found smile comes from Violet as she gives a simple thank you nod while her horn takes the glass into her hold. Her hoof guides the cloud piece into the jar as she quickly caps it.

To the caped jar Sparky moves the lofting cloud with a quick flap of his wings as he starts to move from the window, however before he can get to far Violet extends herself a little out of the window as she embraced him with a one leg hug.

Sparky freezes a little bit both from fear from you walking in and for the fact he doesn't know what kind of cold or what ever the mare has...But he doesn't fight her hold as he just enjoys it.

The awkwardly blocked embrace only last for a few moments as Violet takes herself back into her room. With another quite toned goodbye Sparky moves from the window as he drags the cloud behind him.

Violet moves her attention back to the cloud piece as she trots towards the dresser, she stares to the few jars for a moment before she turns back to the bed where the books lay.

End of chapter 6

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Comments ( 26 )



:rainbowlaugh:, the people who dislike this story are disliking it for two reasons.

1 they never read it and just dislike it because it's to long.


2 They read the first few parts (when I was starting up) and said "Oh it's bad so all must be bad."

~ Honestly if there is one person out there that has read everything and still hates it them i'm sorry you didn't like it. But realistically I just don't see how someone who read everything could have a problem with it. (story wise not gammmmmer).

^But really if anyone read all and still doesn't like it message me I would love to see what I did wrong :moustache:

3408029 you know for some reason I imagine stony looks like your OC. :rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:


Stony is actually my original editors OC from all the way back in part 6 of the MAybe series...But I liked the sarcastic writing so I kept using him.

To see what he looks like visit Soildrock's profile (found on my friends list or in TWC group).

~There's supposed to be a whole story for him *clears throat* but me editor be slow Iz afraid. So questions about the filly's mom is so far unanswered :derpytongue2:

3408089 ~There's supposed to be awhole story for him *clears throat* but me editor be slow Iz afraid. So questions about the filly's mom is so far unanswered
I laughed so hard I fell of my top couch.

how'd i miss this update?????????!!!!!!?!!?!!?!?!??!?!?!??!!?!??!!?!??!!!!1/1/1/1:twilightsmile:

its what ive been waiting for :twilightsmile:

vielets first heat

what? no "fun" in this chapter?:twilightsmile:

Sorry, Violet is still a virgin. :eeyup:

3458117 for now..............................

3458127 no worries, im not gonna rape her :twilightsheepish:


Also Guy would most likely burn half of Equestria just to get Sparky.

3458141 ...

*casts an flame seal on guy*
there :twilightsmile:
*guy removes flame seal with ease*

Holy mother of-




Oh the irony, Guy meets Twi, guy has sex with Twi before they are married (or even really dating) Twi got pregnant and Twi's dad hates Guy... Guy doesn't want anypony around Violet and he's protective* :duck: Irony?

3458175 i guess so... If i can remember how to use irony more then one way, even when i look up the word, I always forget it later on...

So i gave up :twilightsmile:

3458175 and also, its hypocritical


lol, true. But I give you some slack. :pinkiehappy:


Well hoped you enjoyed Violet's heat, now if you excuse me I have to go and get part 53 ready.

3408029 up to this point, there is still something... But I SIMPLY can't putt my Death Star's Scope on it... hmpf... *brain wrack* something that gives your stories a strange feeling of emptiness, like something is missing...
But It seems that I simply can't see it... :twilightangry2: :twilightoops::raritydespair::raritycry: ... :twilightblush::derpytongue2:

Well well well, Sparky, way to go~~~

3458221 ... wait... that comment sounds really, really wrong... *caught*


emptiness? :rainbowderp:

:rainbowlaugh: Oh, you must want somepony to die.


And either way, you should know their is always slow parts between the big stuff. Just look at the Might Be for Us story...Which I was surprised you go through so fast. :trollestia:

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