This story is a sequel to Should be Something...
Eleven years is a long time to call a place you were not born in home.
However, for the most part the family you have been lucky enough to start and the life you have lived has brought you peace at mind, for the situation you were thrust into so long ago. But, sometimes yours or anypony's love just isn't enough to make everything perfect, and sometimes even its magic can't make everypony happy. Although being with loved ones is just what somepony might need when live decides to throw a curve ball.
Every day is a maybe and every tomorrow a might be, so enjoy things now.
Chapters (16)
lol, honestly I think the people who dislike this are jellos or something. It's been what 30 minutes since I got the feed and there is a dislike??
But that's what happens when you write a 60 part series huh Fatty? You get people who probbly never read it and who dislike it because it's to long to read.
No... Sequel? Epilogue?
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After I read this, I'm going on a nostalgia tour
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Never said that
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3713138 So there will be more?
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After Land After...YEs
Ok... Arrow+Milky... let it happen, don't dare to let the story come to an end before they are happily united... don't even think about something like that!
Anyways~
This was AWESOME
[yoda] The force, strong in you is. From you, more such awesome stories, demand I do. [/yoda]
Ow and... "Twilight! Use Lecture on Fatty!!!" *cough*
<- *eyes role*
But; For I had now read seven or so of your stories in short succession, I have to point out, one single glaring Issue: how your couples suddenly come together feels unreal, to little emotion, a little to little prelude to the situation. You can say(or tell the reader), they feel that way, but the success of your story depends in this single moment on "how much of the Characters feelings can the reader empathize/feel?"
Anyhoofs ...
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Author intent: For the stuff with Violet X Sparky in the early days it was supposed to feel dull and weird, why? Because two friends who have known each other for ALL their life are now making a go at it.
Guy and Twi are old news, so their stuff should just be that I love you you love me lets ear cereal.
Aerolight, as you can see here has some problems.
Vio and Sparky have know each other forever, so that should not feel unreal.
Aerolight & Milky is more of a read between the lines thing. None of this was supposed to happen, both were just looking for a good time to service their vice.
Little tid-bit, for the next story you should really brush up on the past stuff, otherwise it will look rushed. But, all honesty go for it
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Lol, word of wisdom.
Arolight's magic is weak? I distinctly remember he teleported as a child at least once. Or MAybe not, I haven't read in a while. But even then I remember human magic being fueled by strong emotion, so if he wants to do something powerfull he just needs to learn to use his emotions, like his father... ah now I see a problem, he probably wouldn't listen to his father and if he did he'd have to find something he felt pretty stongly about, considering his dad had his love of twilight. I felt I needed to write my opinion down before I forgot, then it became a half-rant half-memory-test for series knowledge
as a completely unrelated note I was listening to 'piano man' by billy joel the whole way through this, probably for no other reason as it's the most recent song I listened to that made me sad
I think this title has been used before...and i'm happy to see it again
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Good song
Lol I knew it