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Fat1thatyoulove


Nov 7th "Maybe"

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This story is a sequel to Maybe it can...


Part 28-30 in the Maybe series... Memories or no memories life does not wait and as our character and Twilight continue trying anything to jog a memory... But how much can somepony take of forced memories and dumb spells before they just need a break.

To my old readers, I welcome you to the new arc of the maybe series, hope you enjoy it.
To new readers even thought I suggest starting at an earlier part, you might be able to start here if you would keep an open mind but I suggestion starting earlier.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 42 )

*usual preread stuff*... crit's up in 2h

hmpf MAybe try to insert a line break after all ... how is it called as a punctuation character... dot(?) --> this fellow here --> " . "
I don't know if it is in English literature a convention, but it makes the Text a bit easier to read.

Beside that, I don't have any more tips / ideas atm. ^^"

"fantasie gras"... that actually sounded more like some kind of crazy drug... :rainbowlaugh:

say, what exactly did you intended to translate? ^^
was it fantasy weed.... or fantasy pot... :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:? ... sorry... but thats just to funny!!! :trollestia:
*wipes a tear out of his eye...*
*minutes later*...
good god... hilarious... :pinkiehappy:

it is easy to be unintentionally super funny if you fail to translate something, especially if you use the term Gras or Fantasie
Gras <-> the green stuff ponies and cows eat, or THE slang term for Marijuana.
Fantasie ... well fantasy... lol... but also it means not exactly the same like fantasy, it is more in the direction of "not real" or what novels are about or fictional and can be understood as some kind of subtle erotic hint.

Ok to be serious again... *snickers* "fantasie gras" really sounds like some kind of... ow.. don't know... party where Marijuana, Crystal and Heroin had meet and made some crazy babies... and one of them is Fantasie Gras ... good god that is so good i have to write it down...
but if you switch the two terms it is less... compromising...
"Gras Fantasie" means something around the lines "A vision of willows"... but with an erotic touch in it...


P.S. darn... that actually made my day... lol...

good work ^^

good, good, I see strange things happen next chapter ^^~~~

“We'll be back in two days ok?“

made me think about "fantasie gras"... made me laugh... hard!!! :rainbowlaugh:

and of cause good work ^^

So....Violet gets a little brother hmmmmm?

Twi------>:twilightoops:

:pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh: fantasie gras !!! faaaaaar to hilarious to let that pass!!!


also good work of cause...
I imagined Nightlight fainted like Bilbo in the Hobbit... lol...

fantasie gras... schei*e (fu*k), I have to use that in my works/have to introduce that to my coauthors !!! that's fu*king hilarious!!!
:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

ah yes, yes some how that feels so 145.7% normal *slash* expectable ^^
Night Light, the worldblind Father...

P.S. as i see there is no term in English as far as i believe, which means what i tried to say,
Weltblind: (or like i tried it; worldblind) means:
You are numb for your surroundings like, seeing similarities with recent events in your past, overcoming your own prejudices after obvious facts has shown toward you, a lack of faith in them/ others judgments/ outcome of situations who should have long ago earned your trust.
And of cause the false believing you could and should control others life or situations even if they have long ago reached independence or are independent. and a couple of other stuff i don't remember right now XP...

Anyways FREAKING nice work ^^

:rainbowlaugh::duck::rainbowkiss: not bad ^^

<insert here Rarity> Darling this is fabulous!
This Chapter goes so smooth it's like Jazz~ ^^

uuuuuhhh!!! why do i have the feeling that twi has hold Blueblood on his... ehem... crown-jewels? *caught*

not bad ...

ok it become 4h...
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Oh... with 'our' luck... probably twins... One an earth pony and one a pegasi ... that would be hilarious, cruel and super cute at the same time


P.S. I vote for Flash Sparkle and Origin Light... if you catch my drift... :pinkiecrazy::raritywink:

pack...what could i pack...hmhmhmhhmmmm,hmnh

Sorry, but my proofreaders sense was going crazy on this chapter.

You shake it off as you look back in front of you to the lavender mare that speeds down the street through the crowd, its kind of funny that her coat give her away.

1) it's. Unless your usage actually is using its as a possessive and I'm just being dumb. :twilightblush: 2) gives.

Not because of it color but because every other pony that you pass by seems to be wearing a hat or scarf or some other kind of clothing, which doesn't make sense seeing as how everypony in the last two including yourself don't wear cloths.

1) its 2) I don't know if it's just me, but that segment is a bit confusing. :applejackunsure: Consider revising. :twilightsmile:

The lavender mare drift off of the main street as she turns to her left.

1) drifts

Other than that, good work. I'm really enjoying this addition so far. :twilightsmile:
See you later.
~Mike~

I can't believe this was made just yesterday and then some...

I also want a sequel plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:
Love you forever :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

"Can I help?"

consider adding you after help.

Great chapter. I like how your actually giving him a break for once. :twilightsmile:
See ya.
~Mike~

"...Let me warm the milk you always made it to hot."

There should be a period or semicolon between milk and always.

Great chapter. :twilightsmile: Night Light's reaction was about what I expected it to be, which was fitting.
Later dude.
~Mike~

Great job!!! I can't wait to read the next part. :pinkiehappy:
See you next time.
~Mike~

I didn't think blue blood had the capability to do that kinda magic. he seems to pampered to know more then a levitation spell:rainbowderp:
kinda wished that the MC would have socked him while twilight has dangling him upside down.:pinkiecrazy:

powdered mare heat?! lol I need some!

Should I be laughing this much? oh who cares this is to funny.:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

a little hesitant...hmmmmmm

2521362 lol l...*thinks about it some more*...*laughs again*

that bastard

NOT.DRINKING.THAT.WINE! I bet it's from the same mare that was going to do what she called a "massage".

This makes me sad and happy at the same time

Did fimfiction get a update because I just got on 30 minutes ago on my phone and it just changed

I never really like blue blood but now I just want to ring his neck

all royalty sweets are on the second floor

"suites"

Your link to the next part at the end seems to go to a specific comment on the story, rather than to the story itself.

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Ya sorry about that, in fact some of the stories will stop having links. I'm lazy, but the part numbers should help you find the next ones.

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Actually, it'd be particularly nice if you used the new sequel-marking feature the site has to mark each part as the sequel to the previous. Then they'll show up as sequels in the sidebar, making it much easier to follow the whole series.

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Oh I know, but it would take so long to go though 40 some odd stories doing it. And in all honestiy if you didn't know the MAybe series is not done, so I would rather spend my free time writing instead of tweaking older things.

But thanks for pointing out the spelling mistake, those things I will always find time for, you are a read and it's not your job for pointing them out. So I greatly respect that you took the time to comment it.

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