• Member Since 12th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen May 31st, 2021

Stormy Night


Just a guy who's terrible at names and wants to try his hand at writing. Glad to finally be posting stuff instead of just reading.

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Yeah, I suck at writing descriptions, so I'm sorry that the short one sucks. Let's give it another go eh? This story began as an attempt at a story for EQD's batpony fanfic contest, as well as a chance to put all my batpony headcanon into writing.

Moonsong is a guard at the most secure prison in all of Equestria, Tartarus. When a mysterious explosion allows a number of inmates to disappear, and Moonsong finds herself implicated, she must venture beyond the caverns that have been her entire world on an epic quest to clear her name.

Yeah, hopefully the story is better than the description. I'm gonna try to rewrite this tomorrow in the hopes that I won't suck to bad when it's not 2AM.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Great first two chapters, would like to see Moonsong adapt to the outdoors!

I've got the next chapter partially planned out, unfortunately things are gonna get worse for just about everyone long before they get better.

Trying to figure how to describe, well, anything really, without visual descriptors is proving tough. Trying to place myself in the hooves of a character who had never been able to see, whose world is entirely devoid of any visual input, is a very fun challenge. A bit frustrating at times, but a lot of fun.

3390261 Understandably. Surprised anyone hasn't noticed this yet.

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