This seems promising

Silly crusaders, trying to tame manticores

I like the story and I can't wait to read more!

Whoa, Kenshin Himura in equestria, nice choice.

BATOSAI!!!!!!! Thank god your here in the wonderful world of ponies
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Ok this is good, but can you please follow some of the stuff from the manga? Like not calling him 'Battosai the Manslayer' but 'Hittokiri Battosai'? Two, he always says 'this one' not 'I' or 'me', but overall this is looking good.

Update please, it's started to get interesting.javascript:smilie('');

looking good so far

well now was not expecting this crossover. Could be interesting. *grabs popcorn*

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I am tempted to fave this based solely on the premise.
I FRIGGING LOVE ROROUNI KENSHIN! (I hope I spelled that right...)
Note that I did not say Samurai X... I tried watching the anime but couldn't push through more than the first like, two episodes. So if there are any serious inconsistencies between them, I will not understand.

Well, suppose I should prepare to read this... tomorrow. This one needs his sleep.

I should have the next chapter posted within a few days.

3323794 Thank you

Okay, let start with this. I hate reflection as a Kenshin fan. It spits on the face of everything that Noroboru Watsuki wanted to say with the magna and spits in the face of magna's happy ending (If you want to see Kenshin get the ending he deserves, I suggest you read it). That said, saying that it takes place anywhere in the same universe as that fic means that you would have to come up with a pretty good premise in order to get me to read it...

Congrats, you succeeded in coming up with a pretty good premise.

Now, as to what I think...you are doing good so far and I like your determination to finish it-keep that up, it means that you love what you are doing. Now, there are some problems here and there grammar wise: commas, puncuation, ect. One problem I see is the tendacy to walls of text if you don't have speakers (see the beginning and Fluttershy's appearence) be careful of that and try to find a good way to space it out.

Now, I am going to fave this, because you got me hooked and I am curious to see where you are going.

Okay, I've actually read it now. While it does seem like a good story so far, you may want to fix some things in the future chapters... I don't really think I need to name them, because they've already been abundantly pointed out.

Really, I have nothing to say that no one's already said.

Keep going. You have this one's attention.

Rurouni Kenshin Crossover?

YYYYYEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!

About time.

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The words.

There are none.

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Manga, not magna.

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I noticed that you wrote in a few places:

manticorn

I believe those should be manticore. Unless they're some ungodly hybrid between a manticore and an alicorn...

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I wonder if you realize that it means the same thing both ways?

Hito = person (man), kira = (katakana) killer

Hitokira Battousai = Mankiller Battousai = Battousai the Manslayer

3328062I know that...but it just feels better ya know? But your doing a good job man

I can't wait for the next chapter!

This cross-over is just crazy enough to keep me interested.

You did a very good job making this intriguing enough to gain attention.
Put plainly, I have NO IDEA what manga/anime this is crossed with, yet I still enjoyed it.
Hoping for more
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And if anyone can tell me what the Anime/manga is tha'd be nice too.

3330920 It's Rurouni Kenshin, also known as Samurai X

3328225 I have only ever seen the anime but I will try my best

I am looking for some one to review my new chapters before I post them, in case any ones interested.

3331587Read the manga it is so much better than the anime that's for certain. I've seen the anime and read the manga and the book is better.

Looks good, but you need to seriously space the lines and separate paragraphs. Was a little difficult to read.

It will probably be one to two weeks before the next chapter is up. Just thought I should let you all know.

Okay I originally gave this a look because it was a Roruni Kenshin Cross over... suffice to say I'm hooked. I loved the series even before I became a brony so i hope this story pans out well.

also I'm just follow you right just to get you a heads up keep going, your doing great. javascript:smilie('');

more need lot more

more man kenshin rocks he's funny and awesome

the next chapter should be up in a few days, I was wonder what everyone's opinion on this would be. If I were to introduce another Rurouni Kenshin Character later on in the story, who should it be?

Aoshi

Sanosuke

Or Saito

some grammar mistakes. other than that....well done

sorry for the late chapter. it should be up in a few more days.

It's really hard to read as a huge chunk of text. Try using paragraphing it to make it easier to read please. Other than that, keep up the good work!

Grabs my polearm, a cup of chocolate milk and a plate of doughnuts. "Ok this is going to be as good as a three way dual between Kenji, Handa, and Lu Bu!"

This story is getting interesting by the minute, hope to see how he survive 'heat season', poor bastard

The dreaded 'Wall Of text' makes it hard to get into this story. Better page formatting will help you story immensely.

3377669 I think Saito would be the best choice. I would love to see how the Wolf of Mibu would react to a place like Equestria.

3541200 OH SHITtttttttttttttttttttttt GET READY TO RUMBLEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

if you go back to edit, please leave a space between paragraphs :-) good read though.

neighga... the pony equivalent of manga... I know what you're trying to do, but that word is just so dangerously close to the 'n' word, if someone heard it while they were reading aloud, they would get so many stares. Ono. if you have another alternative for manga in Equestria, I highly insist in using it.

Kinda clumsy and the page structure is poor, but it is quite entertaining non-the-less. I shall continue!

Of course he wakes up in the Everfree Forest

4510738 Of course. Every story with something that isn't native to Equestria has to have it start in the Everfree. It would be too original otherwise.

Rough around the edges, but it seems interesting enough.

I love Kenshin's trademark confused/stunned 'Oro'.

Interesting start. Wonder were it will go because of the fact he's in a manga XD

ok this got my attention ill get the popcorn