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Krasus Shyhoof


I-I'm um. . . . Shy. .

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It's been 7 years. 7 years since the Zerg crept away in masses and just.. disappeared. The war-torn Terran have continued fighting amongst themselves, the Solar Empire, led by Princess Celestia wage war against the small group branded as terrorists named the Lunar Republic. Princess Luna has liberated many planets who would take up arms against the Solar Empire.

(In this fanfic, everyone is in a human form /except for Zerg/. Some adult content may rise in the story. References to the four apocalypse ponies are valid. If there are and problems, or any of this turns off a read, ***Please do not read it. I don't need snarky comments***

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 34 )

I like the story,
The writing is smooth and okay.
A ghost academy theme would work here maybe :rainbowdetermined2:

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Actually, Twilight is a Ghost, and it gets more intense. . She is going to be rescued. . I already got 4 chapters, I just have to type 'em, and thanks :yay:

Could I have a Protoss character?:pinkiecrazy:

Excellent so far good sir/madam. Keep up the good work!:twilightsmile::ajsmug::pinkiehappy::scootangel:

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Sure you can have a character! Just send me a message telling me what type of unit, color armor, tribe, leader/soilder, ground/air. . I need everything. I'll give a name of take a name

Another awesome chapter I can’t wait to see what will happen next.:twilightsmile:

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If you want a charater then message me and I'll find somewhere ta put you in! Also, I do have a facebook guys, it's Zaskorch Skullsworth.

It's Terran, not Terrain
Vespene, not Vespyeme.

1, I write fast
2, I could have been talking about the terrain around them
3, I'm putting you in the story

Very nice, I really enjoy how the story is going. :pinkiesmile: The writing seems a bit mishmashed, and makes it hard to follow the ongoing events. Anyway, it's awesome! Do tell will the OC i suggested make it in? :pinkiehappy:

Kinda short, but decent. I think it would be better if you made Whipsy split between AJ and Pikie, as for Thunder Cloud, I thought he was shacked up with Twilight after their little...."moment". :twilightsheepish: So, pretty much :fluttershysad: becomes the combination of
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and
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around Krasus, and he becomes her?

Last question. What does thou sayeth about the last PM I sent thee?

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Yeah bro, I'l change his story around. He was Korhas, right? I saved the link you showed me so.. I got the info. That section isen't done yet, as I stated, I just got tired of writing [: There will be a scene with FlutterShy and Krasus. As for Thunder Cloud, I thought Pinkie or Spitfire would be better than Twilight and Spitfire. Pinkie, Twilight, AJ, luna, Spitfire.. None of them are officially paired yet.

2284870 That would be Krahas good sir. :twilightsmile: And I understand. I also often get hit by a large dose of lazy. If you are having trouble, do you want me to resend you the bg story for Krahas?

I got the link you wanted to change him to, I made notes in my idea book. I wanna write in a Rival for THunder Cloud. His name is Lightning Shift. It's funny because of Lightning Dust, but I wrote all this BEFORE that episode.

Wait this story shifted from pony to human :rainbowhuh:

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No.. They were always human o:.
This is a humanized fanfic because I like them being humanized for StarCraft things. It makes more sense to me

Hey the e for he at the end doesnt have a h. just pointing that out.

Dude I totally forgot all about this but reading this I remember how my guy is now and you got him spot on.

Good so far is nightshade the shadowbolt?

I'm just happy someone remembered my poor firebats,
Back in brood and sc1, I was unstoppable with my legions of firebats, siege tanks, and wraiths.
Gods I miss the old days..... Looks like I found my plans for the weekend!! :pinkiehappy:

3510832 Natually :P I only used F-bats to combat mass Ling/Zealot. And if you have SC2 I'm usually free to play :P

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I'm always playing nexus, but if you want, my name is Revanant

3507161\Yes, Nightshade is a Shadowbolt c:

Is it intentional, that the story has no description?

Why does this story not have a human tag?

I just wait what just happened with twilight I re-read that part 6 times what just happened this is so sudden For a plot twist or something

This chapter was just what????? How do they pull out guns in a Wraith start shooting zerg and then be outside it and then the dropship is there and then... you know what I'm just done it is ok concept but there is some inconsistencies that are really bad but it's ok

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