A young Pegasus named Thunder Joe always had dream of becoming a professional racer. fairly new in Ponyville he has team up with Rainbow dash to achieve his life long dream. as he is coach by a Legendary Racer Named Blazewing. Determine as he is willing to go from a amateur to a professional racer in Equestria.
great story, little hard to follow since its all grouped into paragraphs, if you start a new paragraph when the speaker changes it would be a lot easier to follow
alright i will try to do that next chapter