Brony since June 2011, aspiring cartoonist, currently attending HCC Southwest.
It's the future, NASA revived manned space flight, and on it's 1st mission was to explore a strange new world. Four Astronauts are sent to explore a new world, only to crash-land in Equestria, where they're strangers in this strange world to find out the shocking truth about the planet they're in...
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Originally, I mentioned Sarah Palin in the original DA published chapter/into, but due to her not running for president, the president is now nameless.
10956name it president dat face
Planet of the Ponies?
Get your hooves off me you damn dirty equine!
Also, Spoilers: It was Earth all along!
I am president Sausage MC Muffin! Derpy hooves is my Vice President!
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Except it's still there. Because, you know, independent candidates have such a huge success rate in general elections. Especially the ones with less brain cells than a blind butcher has fingers.
Yeah, I didn't like this fic very much. The OCs are as interesting as a tax seminar in Bradford, the spelling's patchy and the grammar is just pathetic in places. However, there were some cracking jokes in this. I particularly liked the idea that the Republicans of all people would resuscitate NASA in lieu of private enterprise bids. Hilarious! Keep writing lines like that, brony, they're pure gold!
Is there going to be a moment in this story where we have the infamous..."you blew it all up" scene from the movie ?
Because that would be worth it in so many ways.
I highly doubt a bunch of equines would pose much of a threat to the human race, they have no thumbs, no guns, no tanks, and they are no where as bruital or agressive as humans. In planet of the apes the apes were able to take over because the humans had already suverly damaged there world and lost most of there technology which they could use to fight back with. Ponies though they can fly and use magic are no where near as bruital and violent as humans and apes who are willing to tear anyone who is a threat to them to bloody little shreds of meat. I would have to guess these humans are devolved and no where near as intellgent or violent as the originals.
Dumb. Dumb dumb dumb dumb dumb diddily doo dumb dodo... >_<
I mean WOOOOOOW... I don't think I've ever seen the ponies act more out of character than here. Hunting? Slavery? Training as circus freaks? Torture? Murder? I mean GOOD GOD did you even watch the show?
I mean... I don't care. I don't care if you did this just for fun or just as messing around. What were you thinking putting this out where people could see it?
Jesus... This is possibly one of the worst manglings of the Mane cast, Equestria, and the message of the show as a whole I've ever seen. This... This is so bad...
I clicked this... I clicked this because I love HiE stories and the title was cute but... Oh my god... This is so out of character for everything EVER that it actually makes me nauseous, and I'm not even joking. I don't care what kind of history is going on here, these actions and how out of character it is for such a friendly place is just sickening.
Please... For the love of god, if you have a decent bone in your body... stop writing this fic. It's abominable.
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Agreed.
If it's some random alternate timeline with cruel and unusual ponies, then sure.
But it hasn't been stated as so.
"Human Hunt" I'm fine with, but it's performed in a method so out of character that I can't see it being done by them.
If it were more of a rescue, then sure.
But it's not.
11795 Indeed. I think the author's concept of 'inspiration' has got more to do with following the plotline of his/her inspiration than on adapting the general idea to fit in with the nature of MLP.
Now, I can picture the ponies domesticating humans but not brutally enslaving them. By all accounts this has more to do with Gulliver's Travels than My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
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Idea...
Let me get back to you on that
all the humans needs is guns, an M4A1 can take out 30 ponies in 1 mag...
MOAR!!!
what
"After Barack Obama was voted out of office during the election of 2012, the new president decided to revive manned space travel without the dependence on other countries like Russia"
1) This really isn't the place for american political bias.
2) This really isn't the place for perpetuating american political lies. From the point of view of space access, american industry, space exploration, or space science, the russians have simply been better at that since the late 70s, SpaceX has achieved more progress in the last few years than congress has allowed NASA to do in the past few decades, nothing Obama cancelled would have in any way acellerated a return to the moon, and proceeding ahead with concepts that demonstratable did not work (Aries I) would have ended up destroying funding for the last.
If you want to make things up, then do it properly. If you must bring in pieces of the real world, either parody the hell out of them, or get them right.
This is the only story were the ponies aren't pussy's.
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So there are human-like creatures in Equestria?
And if there was a bite mark in the food and some of their stuff is gone, wouldn't it be obvious there is life? And aren't they scare about the fact there are aliens? And how the hell would human beings be the dominant species on a planet that has life, and was not officially colonized by humans? There is some serious holes in this story, but I'll track it.
I said I was gonna track, but this chapter is pretty damn retarded and makes no sense. So uh... yeah. Not tracking.
As a fan of the old Planet of the Apes movies and MLP, I found this fic incredibly enjoyable!!!! I hope you start working on this again!
Even though this story play out like the original Planet of the Apes, this story reads too quickly. It's too short.
Also, I have to agree with some of the comments, the "Human Hunt" concept while it's acceptable to some degree, the way the pony character act and behave according to that concept are out of place with the whole friendship is magic and peace and love concept that the actual TV show represents.
There's another "Planet of the Ponies" story here on the site, and it's a WAY better read than this one.
I strongly recommend you read that story before you continue writing further. Also, I strongly recommend you change the whole Human Hunting concept around, like have the Griffins or Dragon populations hunt humans down, while ponies simply want to rescue them from abuse and endangerment. That's how I would go.
Anyways, I'm sorry that say that while your story is taking shape, it's too short a read and the human hunt concept with ponies, while somewhat possible, I think is a bit too harsh for ponies to have as part of their concept. This would be more true to Griffins or Dragons, hunting them for meat and food and even as slaves. But not ponies.
Sorry, man. =(