Twilight finds a Rubik's Cube

Twilight finds a Rubik's Cube.
Things happen.

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Sharky

Sharky #1 · Sep 6th, 2013 · · ·

The cube is evil EEEEVVVIIILLLLL IT NEARLY DESTROYED MY FAMILY MY TOWN MY COUNTRY IT HAD TO BE DESTROYED WE DIDNT HAVE A CHOICE BYOND FIRE ACID OR A CANNON! We went with the cannon as for the story mee it could have had a few lines showing twilight running into tipical cube problems and even the contemplation of cheating with celestia and Luna themed shoulder angle/devils

Coda Crescendo

Coda Crescendo #2 · Sep 6th, 2013 · · ·

Personally I thought you did a good idea with the theme. Can't wait for more stories

AtomicMuffin

AtomicMuffin #3 · Sep 6th, 2013 · · ·

I liked the way you wrote Pinkie Pie. The fourth wall breaking was a bit excessive, but that's admittedly part of the Random tag. The transitions cracked me up. I could have done without the resolutions at the end; however, that is a mark of personal preference and thus bears no reflection on my critique of the work. Overall, it was a decent story with several very funny moments.

As for my opinion of the cube:
Haters gonna hate, cube gonna cube.
#EatYourHeartOut (Please note that I do not condone the use of hashtags in any form)

AppleDashofPie

AppleDashofPie #4 · Sep 7th, 2013 · · ·

Well it was a nice story and the way you wrote Pinkie Pie cracked me up for the fact that Rainbow dash didnt know what was happening rarity is a murder twilight was discovering a Rubix cube for about 3 weeks applejack " moves on with life" and is free from her life chore for a while fluttershy moves out because she is practically scared of Pinkie Pie you did well and keep up the good work

MoonlightSparklez

MoonlightSparklez #5 · Dec 1st, 2013 · · ·

nopony is probably ganna believe this, but i had to finish a rubik's cube for homework. never got it done. well it was extra credit

subject pax

subject pax #6 · Dec 1st, 2013 · · ·

3563089 Good to know.
btw i wish my homework was that easy.

Tomo-Domo

Tomo-Domo #7 · Aug 25th, 2015 · · ·

Awwww man!!!! Just when I was gonna write my own fic of Twilight finding a Rubik's cube, I discover this!!! Well there goes my plan of something original. Anyway, as old as this fic is, I like it. Nice job.

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