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The streets are grey. The ponies are like drones. Any form of traitorous thoughts is banned, and will not be forgiven.
Twilight has long since accepted these rules, until one day when a mysterious stranger appears and promises to show her the biggest secret in Equestria.
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Nice start, looking forward to some more. To me Time Turner should be two words, not one.
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Ahh yes, that's how I prefer it to be honest.
Now what does this take inspiration from. The book legend?
This is pretty awesome. and those earpieces remind me a certain... doctor.
This start makes me really interested. please, do go on.
As for Time( )Turner?
Forget both of those! his name is Doctor!
(Honestly I don't mind which you use)
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This idea actually came from a dream I had a few weeks ago.
It took a few weeks to write the 'skeleton' of the story until I was happy to begin writing.
However... I haven't heard of this book, is it good?
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I prefer Doctor to time turner, but for this story it's gonna stick with Time Turner. I hope to write something with the doctor soon, however! :D
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Yes, think matched plus the always war. ( both are great)
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Very similar to a Margaret Peterson Haddix novel.
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Funny thing, I've had the always war recommended to me once by a friend... can't remember when though.
3166561 forget everything I just said, it's the fucking unwanteds.
I think "uphold" would make more sense there.
You are forgiven!
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Good point, I'll get right on that
I have a couple things to say. First, if you tell me how to edit for you (As in on this site, not how to edit.), I'd love to edit for you. Second, this is an amazing story you've got here, it's definitely one of my favorites, and three, everybody's life is so hard and it's sooo hard to update, but chances are mine sucks worse, so even if yours does suck worse than mine, the least you can do is give me updates.
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Amazing? One of your favorites??
That makes me so happy!!!
As for editing, I'd send you the chapter via an email or something as a word document or raw text and you could send it back in your preferred fashion.
Just don't get lazy and decide "I don't have to english, I is have editor!
These will be my faces. 
On a more serious note, your grammar is pretty good, and is one of the many things I love about this story. Don't mess with the groove.
haha trixie has a purple mane.
