Ever wonder why Zecora lives in the Everfree Forest? Here is some back ground. My mind would not rest until there was at least a reason for her being there. So after doing some research into zebras, I discovered that there are 3 types of them; the wild african zebra, the selous zebra, and the greny zebra. Zecora is obviously a selous type, in fact an extreme version of one. A note to the reader, read like a detective, there are some hidden things here.
Zecora is ancient?
I like the start, and the narrative voice. There are some inconsistencies in voice (eg "should scare you", "was a bust"), some vague statements that could be more specific (" in serious jeopardy"), and a lot of grammatical errors. A whole lot of grammatical errors. But the structure is sound. The lack of a hook is problematic for a fan-fiction, but standard for a 19th century novel of letters.