After all the progress humanity and Earth has made, an era of technology and prosperity had been established. However, this turned to be worse than it was good, once such powerful technology ended up being used for war. As a nuclear war begins, one man manages to escape it all, being sent through unknown space. He could only wait until the pod finally located another sign of life which may not even exist, and if it does, what kind of life could it possibly be? Strange green people wanting to dissect him? He'll find quite the contrary once he lands on a particularly bright colored planet he never would have imagined but in a cartoon for little girls or something...
Hello! This is my first fan-fiction ever, and my first story I'm really gonna put effort into writing! I've always been a perfectionist when it's come to writing, and not been able to please myself. I've finally decided to really put effort into it and see if I can really be a good writer. Leave any and all feedback, criticism, anything, and I'll try to implement it and improve my skill and the story as well! Thanks!
this is awesome
This is looking like a promising story. Can't wait to see where it goes!
SO FUCKING SHORTT!!!!!!!!!!! I want MORE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE NO WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Give my cousin time damnit.
This is great! I'm looking forward to more. One thing though, the chapters could be longer.
SO DAMN LITTLE
needs more words
3127729
about five-six times longer.
Okay, guys, thanks for all the positive feedback! I understand that I've been putting some really short chapters, so I'll start to do my best to have transitions within chapters and make them longer. Criticism accepted!
Wow ._. Wow
Okay, so most recent chapter, chapter 3, isn't much longer. I'll still be trying to make them longer than that, up to maybe a few thousand words per chapter if I can, so don't worry!
Grate Story
woh...
3127759 nah... 42 times
MOAR!!!