• Member Since 30th Jun, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 11th, 2015

Major Brony


Suffering PTSD, the ponies help make the nightmares go away... for a while.

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Super Sparkles Demonfang Awesomesauce visits Ponyville and gets with everyone because he is the best pony. Totally not self insert wish fulfillment. He fights Discord and stuff. Adventure, romance, and ummm cheese. Oohhh Nihilism yay!

Artwork uncredited, check. Self fulfillment fantasy insert original character, check. Meaningless contrivance of a plot to get mane six to fall in love with self insert, check! Nihilism, double check! Bad spellingz, punctuation and Gramarrz, trippple check!

It's dark and edgy and rated teen because there was a naughty word. Hehehehe... naughty.

Comedy is the lowest form of wit. Sooo here is some.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

who doesn't love satire :pinkiehappy:

I salute you, sir. :rainbowlaugh:

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That's what I said! :pinkiegasp:

*giggles uncontrollably*

First I was like :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright: , then I was like :facehoof: , then I was like :rainbowlaugh: . I loved it.

3039822 Satire sir??? This is totally super serious piece of post modern literature! =D

It burns... IT BURNS! And it was clearly written to BE like that on purpose! While this is no literary genius, one must put focus into being this terrible. It actually takes a lot to put so much detail in this kind of crap to ACTUALLY BE this kind of crap! You even have the (single) chapter title laid out so as to make it seem like more chapters will be added!

I also love the lampshade hanging and the fact that DISCORD is the only one with proper English in the entire story. Though his "Your Brother's Grandfather's only Daughter's other Son" routine ends with the answer of Discord being Sparkles whatever the fuck, not himself. Whoops. Eh, that could be chalked up to Discord mind games and actually ADDS SOME DEPTH TO THIS STORY, the almost depthless story.

*applauds and pukes at the same time*

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