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A Soldier's Pain

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tranhdxrbntd #1 · Aug 4th, 2013 · 2 · · Chapter III ·

You need to work on grammar, punctuation, and basically everything in english

BronyKiller1 #2 · Aug 4th, 2013 · · 1 · Chapter III ·

TBear

TBear #3 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · Chapter I ·

Needs work on grammar but still good!

djponyfl

djponyfl #4 · Aug 6th, 2013 · · · Chapter IV ·

good story so far.

can't wait to see the next chapter.

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