The forest is on fire: Can the village put it out alone, or will they need help?
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Very sweet short story. My only complaint is that you left the explosion to be a mystery, Well it had such an important role in this story it would only seem fit that we knew what caused it.
The things i did like was the humor at the start; it was a very nice touch. How the CMC was used in the story, the Fangirl scene with Rainbow dash was neat too, along with the history of friendship note at the end.
Bravo and encore! I hope to see more stories by you.
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Thank you! I may decide to make a followup to the story at some point, but I was aiming for the air of mystery behind it. I mean, realistically, after an explosion like that it would have been really, really difficult for anypony to discern the cause.
And I do have other stuff, go read it