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I have to ask, just how far in advance did you plot this story out? Because reading this first chapter I already see things that will be referenced and even called back to later on (Velvet's show) so how far did you plan?
I can't believe it took me that long to realised this code meant Cutie Mark Crusader Three Best Friends Forever
2918384 It's ok. I just realized the same thing just now. lol.
I believe it should be "irrevocably."
Besides that, great chapter all around. This continues to intrigue me, and reading it for my first time is awesome.
2920441 ohh friend you have no idea. Epic doesn't even begin to cover how wild this ride gets.
I don't think I can tell you how much I'm loving this, and I only just finished chapter 1
2920441 Boy are you in for a ride. The action ramps up pretty quick shortly after this point, and stays that way throughout most of the story(with the occasional breather chapter for us poor readers to rest our brains a bit).
I actually just started playing Fallout 3 for the first time yesterday, and if it's anything like this story, I've got a lot to look forward to in my rampage across the wasteland.
CMC3BFF.... Wow, I did not catch that last time..
I can only imagine deathclaws and mirelurks
Ohoh, here we go, this is it!
ffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkk aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
CMC.....
Cutie Mark Crusaders reference anyone?
It's been a year since I've last read this, and I had only ever gotten to chapter 28.
I suppose I should refresh my memory before starting again.
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What he said.
The second part, not the "irrevocably" bit, I suck at spelling.
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Pff, this whole thing's already complete.
It has been a while since I have read this fic. However, I tend to re-read stories to see what I have missed. Sometimes, I will find a detail that resonates with me. Soon, I may get to the point that I can play the whole thing in action inside my mind.
2918384 I just realized that too.
I wonder what her S.P.E.C.I.A.L stats are, and if you could recreate a character like her in Fallout 3.
Sweet long-gone Celestia, have I been waiting for this story! At last! YES!!!
I am glad
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I think what 2917869 meant was how far in advance was it planned out when it was being typed.
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When I started writing, I had the main plot arc and sub-arcs planned out, as well as pretty much everything that would be in each of the "The X of the Y" chapters (such as Chapter Six and Chapter Nine).
reading this while listening to mircleofsounds song "wasteland soul" seems to fit so well..
I remember reading that 'CMC3BFF' code for the first time and immediately thinking "Wait, WTF just happened?"
I love fallout and really like MLP.
I think I'm gonna love this story!
First time reading. ALREADY EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why do I have a feeling that the pony who talked in the sound file on Velvet's PipBuck was AppleBloom? She has a sweet voice, and she has an accent. And CMC3BFF? Cutie Mark Crusaders 3 (Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle and AppleBloom = 3 total) and they're Best Friends Forever.
I think I'm getting somewhere!
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I'm sorry you missed that...I found that part so moving that it brought me to tears. I had to stop reading for a good minute to compose my self.
SPOILERS
And yet, at this time, it's hard to find a better place to live in all of what once was Equestria. Certainly Stable 2 is more pleasant than Stable 99, and in better repair, for example. And pretty much any Stable that still holds living ponies is safer than most of the surface.
But, that's how preferences go, when you don't get a choice.
(Gilded cage not depicted.)
But, in fact, it was not nothingness, but merely the illusion thereof. Not that that's much of a consolation after it's devoured your soul.
Soon, Littlepip, you shall see that some ghost stories are more true than they know.
I had forgotten just how completely your life changed after you left the Stable.
That's not nearly so fun as pulling it on alicorns, though. Even if you can only do that once.
CMC3BFF=Cutie Mark Crusaders Three Best Friends Forever?
Is the Overmare...Sweetie Belle!?
You had me intrigued. Now you have my attention.
Oh wow. Instantly I thought "Cutie Mark Crusaders Three Best Friends Forever." and it looks like every reader figured it out that quickly as well.
Dang, already throwing in a bit of darkness.
I'm really excited for this story.
CHERCHEZ LA MARE SERIOUSLY IT WORKS OS MUCH BETTER
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I agree it'd sound better, but it doesn't much matter. I'm just pleased to see it there at all, ha.
Anyway, I'm at the same time pleased and [very] slightly disappointed that such little time was spent in the Vault/Stable narratively. I always loved that connection Fallout 3 had me feeling with Vault 101. But I imagine the story has other things in mind, and I can just infer the connection anyway. lol
Oh, and it's just a matter of preference (like Cerchez la Mare), but I see no need to change Overseer to Overmare. Seems like trying a bit too hard to ponify things, but it's a trifle matter. I shall solve the issue with headcanon.
Also, though it too is a small thing, if this level up/perk get thing is ongoing, I should think I'll very much enjoy it. I approve. lol
3340110 I had the exact same reactions to both things!
I'm gonna go out on a hunch and say that Velvet is Sweetie Belle...
Well, I must note now that I should take back my wee complaint about how it seemed the Stable would be inconsequential to the story. Not much is done with it, yeah, but I don't feel what I was saying is really valid, anymore. lol
Littlepip isn't the (good) Vault Dweller. She's her own character and this story is its own, of course. It's best that way (especially with certain things I know now).
On that note, though, I've always defended Death Note: Equestria, more or less, regarding how closely it follows the original material. I do love it as it is--I'd say it is similar in quality to Fallout pony--and it does diverge from the original story in small ways (relatively speaking; some differences are quite notable, especially the extra operation at the end of the latest arc). However, as always, but even moreso now... I have to wonder what could have been.
I think both sticking to source plot and staying away from it can be good, but after reading this story, I really can't help but think that DN:E could have been much better if the story it told were even more original. The upcoming, final arc apparently is going to be much closer to F:E in this regard, but for the most part... Yeah. lol
Well, well, well... The entire story, Pip worries over how the Wasteland "eats at her spirit," but here she is saying that life in the Stable does the same thing, in effect. Now that's food for thought...
Oh, and I never did note that many times in the story, questions do not end in a question mark, but a period. Can be a bit jarring at times, having to reread a sentence perceived with the proper tone.
I just watched Luna Eclipsed for the first time after reading this story, and I noticed that towards the end, Zecora calls Pipsqueak, Little Pip.
As soon as the part with the crowd came up, I immediately knew where this was going......
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I just finished the story earlier today and am planning to reread it all now...
Very much looking forward to daring to read all your comments
This time I don't have to fear spoilers after all
I hope you won't mind but I forsee many replies to your things as I go through this epic wonder once more
So what does LittlePip's voice sound like? I can't help but picture her as a boy and that's not good for any-one.
I just decided to read this today. Without spoilers is it good enough to warrant so much attention?
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I personally think that Jessica Nowack, who is playing the part of Littlepip in the radioplay, does a wonderfully spot-on voice for her.
Found this on EQD the day it was finished. Read it all in an insane bout of obsessed scrolling during which time seized to be. Found it posted here. Going back into the thing where time isn't a thing. See you in a few days, world.
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Oh wow
I never really thought about littlepips voice, having read this all in the monotinous 'head-voice'
But youre right, this really does fit quite well, its a shame I hadnt heard it when I was reading this
3762780 i actually think the people at stable-tec studios nailed most characters.
i just don't like the guy that did calamity's voice.
My friend told me to read this. Now I'm hooked and I've only read the Prolog and Chapter 1.
CMC3BFF
Cutie Mark Crusaders 3 Best Friends Forever
I see what you did there.
Littlepip here had learned the absolute and eternal truth of the universe: That one should treasure a dreary, unexciting life. Because when your life gets exciting, you'll be praying to every deity you can recall that it stop being exciting.
You got me hook, line, and sinker.
This is the First time I'm reading this. And im Already sucked in. This is going to be Awesome! /)^3^(\