• Member Since 7th May, 2013
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Bronze Gears


Somewhat inactive I'm sorry

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders are always coming up with new ways to earn their cutie marks, Applebloom goes beyond the ordinary this time, though sometimes... you can hit 2 birds with one stone.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 10 )

don't normally go for the short chapter ones, but your cover art had me!

also advice: join a group, you'll get noticed way more!

More please! I am really enjoying this story! Good work, maybe try explanding your chapters a little but still, bravo! You get a like, and I am putting this on my read later list to check for updates! :pinkiehappy:

Your story is cute:pinkiehappy: I don't think anypony has done a flying machine tale:twilightsmile:

The more I read, the more I think about Ducktales. The Cutie Mark Crusaders as Huey, Louie and Dewey, Big Macintosh as Launchpad and Applejack as Ms Beakley, although that last one was mostly due to her lack of appearances in this fiction and her lecturing the Cutie Mark Crusaders in the show.

I don't know why, it just seems like it could lead into this big epic adventure, despite its humble beginnings. Either way I'm enjoying what you have written.

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I have no idea what that show is, but it seems pretty legit. But wow, this story must have somehow popped into my brain, based off a show I've never even heard of... :yay:

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I may have mislead you. The show doesn't really have much in the way of any relevance to this story, it just so happens that certain themes and characters cause me to think of it.

The show Ducktales is an old Disney cartoon from around the late 1980's to the early 1990's, so it isn't really expected for you to know it, although I would recommend it, I myself enjoy the show quite a bit.

Umm, interesting. Though there's no way to control an airplane like that. You have to have rudder pedals, be able to pull the yoke back and push it forward to change altitude, a throttle control separate from any pedal, the 'air brake' doesn't function like car brakes (it just slows you down, normally only used for landing), etcetera. With what she just told Big Mac, it'd never get off the ground, and he'd "drive" it like a car.

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Ok, that might help!:twilightsheepish::facehoof:
I don't personally know much about the tools in airplanes, only cars... :facehoof:
But I'll look some airplane stuff up and edit it! :yay:

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It hurts. Not in my heart but in my arteries.

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