My submissions to the various writting competitions, 30 Minute Pony Stories prompts and writeoff.me. Posted here so I can receive some feedback
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- Member Since 7th Jun, 2013
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GullibleCynic
Grammar Marxist? Prose to the proletariat! Seize the means of communication!
GullibleCynic
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Naw, you did fine. Better than I could do but I admit I was looking for a clever twist.
I used to think that helping others to achieve their own dreams was enough... until everyone had achieved theirs and moved on.
No complaints. A short and simple story with a powerful lesson. Although, I do think there needs to be more Sombra stories and you do have an interesting idea here. By the way, do you ever imagine Sombra as being a noble king turned evil, similar to Luna?
It's a space station.