A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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Anyone can make a villain look bad but it takes skill to make you like a villain.
Nice this is turning out pretty well.
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Nah, I thought about it, and I think it's because I like the idea of there being a likeable, decent creature under all the aparent nastiness.
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Okay, truth is I like the idea of someone seeing the kind, decent person under my strange, perverted psyche.
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So you like the stories that break the stereotypes of how they are viewed? With you there dude.
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Yep! I mean, just because by nature they have to suck the love out of somepony, doesn't mean they're a bad being, just that they have some rather strange dietary needs. I think my favorite real life version is vampire bats. They actually do need to drink blood to survive, but they don't kill, and they're saliva has an anesthetic in it. Also, they need a rather minute amount of it to survive.
S...stutters. Yes.
Very awkward conversation there at the end. Hope the story gets better.
They are living in a romance novel.. they won't know until they break the fourth wall... *some pony needed a pink mare?*
Silly changeling the friendzone is a female construct. Is manila gonna be her rival for rhinos affections?
The story is progressing nicely. I'd normally leave a comment after each chapter, but with 70 chapters... I find that to be a bit of a stretch. It seems that we're slowly learning a little more about Gel's mission, but I'm still not entirely sure of what it is. She's trying to get close to Rhino, but I thought her mission was to find out of any defenses against Changelings that may be popping up or something.
~SolidFire
I loved it all I loved the Rhino' s prospective I hope that there is more of it.I can't wait to see what happens next between him and Gal and what happens next to them..
Hmmmm...
I know its almost two years on... But almost everything here is either completely coincidental, or contrived for the sole reason of just 'making it work'
I'm not saying its bad, but there have been countless moments where the choice of words doesn't fit, the perspective changed without warning, and context still hasn't been applied to the only major plot thread remaining in this story...
We know Gel wanted to go to Ponyville to (supposedly) spy on the mane 6, which makes sense since they are a manor threat to the changelings... But then she really wanted to meet this stallion for some reason that hasn't been told yet...
Now, Gel obviously had ulterior motives when leaving the hive, but since you flat out said that when in the hive any changeling can check her thoughts, why weren't the thoughts of betrayal noted by anyone? Because there doesn't seem to be any thought/attempt from Gel to gather information to take back to the hive...
I guess its still early in the story, and I'll weigh in later on when more is revealed... But right now, all I know is that Gel wants to bed Rhino for *some* apparent reason that she's known about since before she left the hive...
Again, I know its almost 2 years old, but someone has to make some noise...
"...But we aren't living in a romance novel, are we, Rhino?" As much as I wish we were...
But you are.
Oooohoohoohoo, this is so interesting... dang it, I'm getting all up in these Changeling romance fics... I'm probably going to end up trying my hand at it sooner or later, damn it.
Nicely done, nicely done!
that foreshadow though
Yes, actually. Yes you are.
WOHO, THIS IS FAST.
As much as I like drama, there's not much leading up to this...
Hopefully there's some complication soon where they remain just friends for a while...
Other than that, I guess basic character introductions are going well.
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Fast? Seems like you never saw changeling infiltrator in action!
Don't get fooled by her seemingly innocent behaviour my friend! I bet in some chapter she will blow our minds!
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I hope she does... Love bug action much needed!
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It's a CHANGELING. They are not typically known for going slow, unless there is something seriously wrong.
Furthermore...where else is she going to get the Love she needs? O.o; She was only supplied with a finite amount, and she needs to get more so she can feed. She has EVERY motivation to want to jump that poor stallions bones and have him make her his mare.
Damn, Rhino smash lmao
Ah, yes, before she was called Fauna.
An escort *eyebrow waggle*
I... did she just? In front of? What?
JUSTBUCKALREADY
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