A changeling nymph is accepted to go into deep cover in the town of Ponyville. However, what exactly are her motivations for requesting this assignment? Is it for the hive? Or is it for herself?
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First! Nice job bro
I always enjoy reading this it's well paced and you've updated it every day so far that I cany tell, shy changeling approach is awesome! Keep it comin'!
WOOHOO! GAMENIGHT!
Loving this still
4th... still loving your story, gives me something to do all day...
I steped pn a lego this morning.... nothing is worse.
Still a delightedly light hearted and wonderful tale. Continue, my good man!
i am honestly curious as to when gel will reveal her secret to rhino, and if rhino will accept her for who she is, or never want to see her again
i actually played their game of chess and i found it very interesting i also love chess
She going to reveal herself soon? This...will be interesting.
I loved it all another sweet chapter I can't wait to see what happens next between them and what happens next to them.And what kind of pet they pick .I hope it is a boy and girl of the same animal so the pets can have each other when there owners what some alone time.And they can make a cute little mini couple.
God, you could cut the sexual tension with a chainsaw. In all seriousness, they. Need. To. Bang.
Yeah no kidding. Making it way to much of a big deal.
4935309 Nah brah, I enjoy how they circling around it without getting down-and-dirty...much like tantra!
...OH WOULD YOU TWO JUST FUCK ALREADY!? THE SUSPENSE IS KIELING MEH!
I wuv dis fic with my entire darkened void-like heart.
Ah, so she was either hurt during the attack or when they were repelled by the love wave.
... Subtle questions there, Gel.
Cya
Raziel-chan
...and people think they're moving too slow? This is what, day three? Four?
They. Do. Not. Know. Each other.
At all.
Look at this from their perspectives. I mean, for all Rhino knows, she could be some kind of vicious, love-sucking parasite who will drain every last speck of happiness from his life until there's nothing left but a broken, withered husk of a stallion.
She could also be a changeling, so there's that, too.
I would say more on the subject, but Aragon has already covered it. (Warning: contains Aragon.)
*cue for cliche evil villain laugh filled with ominous thunderbolt lightning*
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Good to see, since you would've had to strike Angel and been a vengeful, misled stallion - seriously, does anypony actually know anything about changelings at this point? If this 'fic takes place a small time after A Canterlot Wedding, then Thorax isn't a thing yet (let alone becoming a citizen of the Crystal Empire), so I doubt it.
If somepony did know a thing or two about changelings, they'd know of the hive, and the mental link all non-deep cover changelings have with their hive - meaning Queen Chrysalis could probably tell if a specific 'ling was going to be rebellious or not, and 'discipline' them.
In essence, the changelings had no choice but to attack Canterlot - their queen ordered them to do so, and thus they did so, even if they didn't especially want to.
Again, good thing you've managed to do just that - not that you know it yet. However...you've technically already been 'uneasy' around her, but that's not due to her actual species, but rather her flirting.
Huh, she's actually 18. And... she's had practice with sex before.
...
I'm gonna assume 'lings have quicker maturation periods than ponies.
Midsummer or mid-summer? Because the Summer Sun Celebration happens during MIDSUMMER (the start of summer), not mid-summer (the middle of summer). Literally every author makes this mistake and it's honestly getting on my nerves. @_@
Gosh dang, she's REALLY bad at not spouting info.
Oh. The barrier fucked her memory up. That's... really tragic actually.
(God this chapter was cute)