A new threat has arisen, and a group of five friends must survive the wrath of it. How will they fare when this evil was one of their own?
This is a fic that ties into the collective fics of the Sunblazers; as written by Blue Lightning (Talguy21).
Again with the hypershort chapters, but I have the final chapter written, and I PROMISE to write the rest eventually.
nice story
also needs a cover art and you should join a group!
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Yep, it does, and I might.
I found a typo. "It discharged at Blue's vacant seat, singing it to a pile of ash." It should be "singeing." I know, singeing looks stupid and unintuative, but hey, hat's english for you.
EDIT: also, to singe means to burn lightly or superficially. A better description for what you meant might be disintegrate.
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So it is... stupid English. And I knew what I meant when I said singeing, as it implies it was lightly scorched a lot of times, rendering it to a pile of ash bit by bit. More brutal that way, you see.
Red's brutal like that.