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Talguy21


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This story is a sequel to Ghosts in the Code


**Inspired by the song of the same name by Aviators ft. Princewhateverer.**

That day was like any other... a nice enough day, all told. I made my patients feel better, my bills were paid, and I wasn't going hungry. Being a counselor in a happy town like Ponyville isn't an easy job, and my life is rough. At the end of the day, though, I make ponies happy, and that's what matters. I'd lived a peaceful life there for the past three years, and it was a content one. I'd have been happy there. But that day... that day, one that should have been like any other, everything went upside-down. My name is Bright Dawn, and this is my story.


I'll add character tags relevant to a chapter a week after they air, as to avoid the spoiling of the thingstuffsomethingorother. Also my first story with a female protagonist. We'll see how this goes.

Comments of the supportive/constructive variety are highly encouraged! (Just don't mindlessly flame me and we'll be good.)

[Gore] Tag just to be safe.

While this is the 'sequel' to Ghosts in the Code, it isn't required reading. After all, it was a retroactive prequel.

Cover art by Devix

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 28 )

Well that was... Interesting... I liked it. So how long till the next chapters out?

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Hard to say... It's written in a composition notebook, presently... How long it'll take for me to get off my lazy plot and transcribe it... Who knows? It's been almost 9 months since I wrote it, I think.

If you had my handwriting, you'd understand. :applejackunsure:

I intend to eventually, but as of right now, I have no idea.

Sorry about that.

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Funny thing, It happened much sooner than I anticipated! Lucky you! :derpytongue2:

Gonna cry now. :raritycry:
'Kay, I'm all better! :pinkiehappy:
Great read so far, can't wait for the end and epilogue! :twilightsmile:

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Glad you've enjoyed it so far! Kind of helps justify me getting off my lazy plot and typing it up. :twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by Peanut970 deleted Sep 30th, 2014

It was quite enjoyable. :pinkiehappy:

I'm gonna cry now. :fluttercry: Also, WILL THESE ADVERTISEMENTS STOP SHOWING BAD DRAGON!? :twilightangry2:

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Need a tissue? :unsuresweetie:

I have something flu-ish right now, so I have plenty to spare.

5100294 Probably, I dunno. :applejackunsure: Free derps for the story, btw! :derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

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Gah! Ish Durpi! I's so happsy rite nao! :derpytongue2:

But seriously, thanks for your time. :twilightsmile:

I'm the potato weesperer! :pinkiehappy: Silliness aside, best story. DAN OUTA DAN. :derpytongue2:

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Aww... :twilightblush: Thanks man! Means a lot that you liked it. :twilightsmile:

I love this story! Great thing I found it from 'the mirror' song. Like I said there, it goes with mine too:pinkiehappy:

I think i`ll follow you, I love this story so much!:pinkiecrazy::heart::pinkiecrazy:

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Glad you liked it! I have it's sequel written up in a notebook, and the threequel is almost done too- but this has been the state of affairs for several months. The sequel's been done for a couple years, in fact. Odds are, it's not coming very soon either. :fluttershysad:
Yeah, don't take notes from my updates, they're really bad.

So, when is the next one coming?

I'm sad the sequel is dead.

One can hide only so long...

Haha and here we were expecting a reveal. Psych!

.... It's "false pretenses"
Gotta give them credit, action is taken quite swiftly in the hive.

It's quite curious the amount of effort being spent on two meager dissenters. Sure hope it's worth it...

Lucky break. Wonder if that guard will be punished?

Too easy. There's Gotta be a trick....

Hrm. They better feed soon. Artificial meal replacements can only go so far.....

Aww man, we missed an impossible fight!

Well that was fun. Quite a bit hand-wavy but not obnoxiously so.

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