Ghosts in the Code

TMirrors
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Never trust what you see in your reflection. Bright Dawn has a good life, and it's been good ever since she moved to Ponyville. She was making ponies happy, and that's what matters. One day, her reflection brings it all down.
Gore
Twilight
Rarity
OC
Chrysalis
Changelings
Talguy21 · 11k words · 28 1 · 839 views

When blasphemy echoes through the halls of the Hive, a Changeling is sentenced to death. Drones, all the same, are told to escort and guard her. But what happens if there's a ghost in the code?

Inspired by a song of the same name by Aviators, and a prequel to Mirrors.

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silentname

silentname #1 · Jul 8th, 2014 · · · 2: Malfunction ·

Best album ever, amirite?

Talguy21

Talguy21 #2 · Jul 8th, 2014 · · · 2: Malfunction ·

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It's pretty good, and there are some tracks I really liked, like this fic's namesake, but overall, I liked Mirrors more. I've got 3 stories based on that one. The only one here on Fimfic is about 1/4 - 1/3 typed (Mirrors), the second is complete on paper but also untyped (Momentum), and the third is maybe 1/3 done at most (Zero).

If you liked this, though, Scape, Entropy, Pincer, and Crusher (The first warrior) show up in the future stories, along with some actual ponies here and there. That said, going with the odds here, they're not going to be here any time soon. My handwriting sucks, and I don't often feel like transcribing it into the internet.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Oct 5th, 2014 · · · 2: Malfunction ·

Well, I know the name of the sequel I'll be reading when I get the chance. Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

Talguy21