This idea came to me after reading Last Cask of Amontillado by Edgar Allen Poe. (Neither of them are related, just the revenge story got the gears spinning)
It had been years since he'd done anything to break my heart, that I knew of-of course. I feel though, as if he's hiding something. He's been gone for almost a week now, and I guess I must make due to entertain myself or find something to do. Maybe I could find something with some interest to me. After all, what could he be hiding from me?
Chapters (1)
A story about two characters that need more love? Commence read (though you might want to change coarse to course in your description)
My thoughts as I read the story as well as typos I see (spoilers I can't be vague about hidden behinds spoiler tages as a courtesy):
Fancy is cheating on Fleur?
This mirror sounds...scary somehow
a house full of secrets. This could be very interesting
"the think blankets of dust" (You mean thick I assume)
"slightly stick its neck out farther" (I think this would work better as "stuck its neck slightly farther out")
i still felt (capital I)
So let's see where this goes in the next chapter.
Edit: Threw it in some groups to give it some visibility
2825857how did I miss those? Seriously, I think I read through this about seven times...
Anyway, I won't confirm nor deny any of the questions you asked but I will say this. I thank you for the favorite and the like (guessing it was you).
Amazing chapter! Also can't wait to see where this goes!
2826230Thanks dude!
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Your welcome!
2825857Oh! And thank you for throwing it in some groups. I do appreciate that you're trying to get it out there!