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"Big Mackintosh, I don't think ya understan'. I have some money now, we can save Appleblo-"

"Dammit Applejack, you don't get it. Applebloom is dead, she died last night, how many times are you gonna make me say it?" I heard him crying on the other line. The realization hit me as hard as a semi would hit a rabbit crossing the road. Head on it hit me. Almost crippled me up onto the floor.

"She can't be, I saw her two days ago, how can she-"

"She's gone Applejack, just come home. Please, I don't wanna lose you too. Just come home."

Applejack has moved on with her family from the farm to a smaller city farther east. After a chance encounter, little Applebloom over the years has developed a sickness few have survived from. When Applejack finds something that could change their lives forever she is dropped into a much bigger game that if she doesn't find a way out it could wind up killing everypony she knows.

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I finally read one!!!!!! its pretty good, but the lack of accent is starting to hurt my brain... i know its hard, but it would be a nice touch.

2794782Dude! I'm so happy you liked it!The accent will come out in the dialogue rather than the main text. I tried doing it all with the accent but it was really hard to follow and to write as well :ajsleepy: sorry about that...

I almost thought this was a sidestory to Hunting the 6, but it took me a few minutes to recall AB died another way. You...you don't like AB much, do you?:ajbemused::applecry:


Just teasing. :ajsmug:

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No, I guess I don't do I?
And I'm sorry for the mix up, this has nothing to do with Hunting the 6 (And I'm really happy you put the '6' in there and not 'six')
This, hopefully, is the last fic I'll be writing where one of the younger characters gets killed.

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(And I'm really happy you put the '6' in there and not 'six')

I almost did, but I do occasionally recheck my sources.

Taking a break from Mane 6? Inquiring mind would like to know.

2845773I've been working on the same chapter ever since about two days after the last chapter came out, less of a break and more of writers block.... I've deleted, rewritten it, deleted again, started from the ground up, and once more tore it down. I had some other ideas that I had with writing it so i decided to get those down and uploaded them, i PROMISE withing the week i will have a new chapter for hunting the 6.


(On top of that I'm sort of a amateur musician and I just got a new microphone that I've been playing with.)

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No need to rush anything. You don't have to promise anything, I was just curious. If you continue to have writer's block, take a breather. We'll wait.

2846488I can't have that though, i am privileged to have people as you and some other followers that enjoy my work. I should not make you wait due to my own problems. By the end of the week, i promise that

I'm sorry I have been away for so long, I meant to put this out earlier but currently I've hardly have had time to sleep with trying to record and finish some other stuff (Trying to do everything by myself is such a bitch :pinkiesick: ... seriously). It will be another week or so before I release the next installment of Ht6 but until then please accept this chapter to show that I'm still here and doing my thing and I haven't forgotten about you guys. Anyways, thanks everypony and have a great week!
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