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Bullet Proof

It all started with a normal day on 2fort, as well as a normal day in Ponyville, but two different accidents will pull two different groups together in a struggle for survival.

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The Grey Pegasus

The Grey Pegasus #1 · Feb 27th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1-Computers ·

Intrigued. Tracking to see where this goes.

You got a couple grammatical problems like capitalization on names, but fine for the most part.

Aqua Mark

Aqua Mark #2 · Feb 28th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1-Computers ·

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thegoodcritic

thegoodcritic #3 · Mar 3rd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1-Computers ·

Interesting so far. Tracking.

Giggapuff

Giggapuff #4 · Apr 7th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1-Computers ·

"MAGGOTS, ARE YOU EVEN AIMING?"
"PYRO, SPY CHECK ON THE RIGHT!"
"TAKE OUT THAT SNIPER!"
"TAKE OUT THAT SOLDIER! HE'S TRYING TO CONFUSE US WITH FAKE ORDERS!"

Best solider scene ever.