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Gregmanwit


I like videogames and MLP. Expect crossovers.

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After the events of "Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story", Fawful finds himself in a new kingdom. And better yet, he's hungry on conquering it! What could his plan possibly be this time? Takes place during the events of "Ponyville Confidential."

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

...Okay, let's just be truthful here.

*deep inhale*

I don't like what Fawful is going to do to the CMC.

... With that said, it was pretty much to be expected. I mean seriously, this is Fawful we're talking about, for heavens sake.
The story itself, and the character interaction as well as the style of the story is otherwise excellent. Really the only thing to complain here is that it's too short.

...Okay, it isn't too short. And it's better written than most of the stuff here. But we demand MORE! MOAR I TELL YOU, MOAR!!

Also, watch out, Cutie Mark Crusaders!
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Because I can.

IT IS FUNNY BECAUSE I HAVE CHORTLES!!!

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Thanks for the support! I've honestly never heard someone compliment my writing style, so you're first on that. Also, I'll try to get later chapters to be longer, because when people demand more, they must get more! I'll try to have next chapter as soon as I can, but I should take time with my writing. As they say, great things take time.

How nice of you to be writing a story about the great Fawful!

I apologize for the HUGE delay in chapter 3. I've been pretty preoccupied these past few months and I've had little to no time to write more. I'll have you all know, however, that I'm completely free from school, so I can spend more time on the story. You can expect chapter 3 anywhere from Saturday to next week.

You got Fawful SPOT-ON!!!

Now... He Must Have CHORTLES!!!

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67 weeks later...
Well... We're waiting

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