When Rainbow Dash messes up Twilight's work it doesn't end well. The mistake is so big that the two friends switch bodies while arguing who has to work more. With a difficult time in each others places they realize that they were both wrong. When the other ponies switch too it gets to be a major problem. But they have some trouble turning back.
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This story has a very good concept that definitely warrants interest. Bodyswapping of opposites is an excellent story idea most of the time and I haven't really see many between RD and Twilight. However, the story feels pretty rushed (particularly the first chapter which also feels out of character) and you would do well to check your story's grammar (Particularly the name of the fourth chapter).
2827768 thanks for the advice I'll check that grammar now
nice read
keep up the good work!
2917001 thank you
This was ridiculously short.
These chapters are getting better
I think Fluttershy's body has more physical power than Rarity's. I have my own theory on how the different types of ponies' bodies work.
This is how it always starts... doesn't mean I hate it.
In almost every point of a cartoon series this kind of episode happens, like this comment if you think it will happen in season 4
Changeling spell?
Sorry to disappoint you but one part needs editing
Otherwise,great story!
3573428 Heh yeah I remember that I edited it myself but the edited version never saved thanks for reading