The greatest challenge anyone or anything had to face was being a parent. Worrying over someone elses needs and wants, tending to them day in and day out.
Is the royal family ready to accept this way of life?
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King Condius
Life gets in the way. But that's okay. Take a breath and we can all spread a little kindness to everyone.
King Condius
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it's not eccept it's accept there is an a instead of e but no worries.
Yes there are some errors, give me a break its my first story.
This is a very creative and well written story. But I have a request. Could you put up a chart to show who is married/mated to who? It's a bit difficult to remember who's wife is who's. Thank you.
Sure thing.
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Ok. So luna is married to nightmare, aurora, chrysalis, and her sister. Nightmare is married to luna, aurora, celestia, and chrysalis. Celestia to aurora, chrysalis, nightmare, and her sister.
And chrysalis to the other three. Nightmare and aurora have one child, dusk. Luna and aurora two, serion and swift. Celestia and aurora one, tia. And aurora and chrysalis one, melody, who i will introduce later.
I don't think its bad at all. I mean, I could do a lot worst.
My spelling? Horrible. Writing is surely not my thing. But,it is yours. You should cherish that.
Don't let anypony tell you otherwise.
This is a place of imagination, but there are some people out there that are confused.
So no matter what story you write, know that I stand by you.
*sniffs* thank you my little pony. I will cherish your kind words.
I am having trouble continuing this story, if anyone has a suggestion, please send me a message.
This is a quite interesting story. I like it. But, there are a lot of typos in this.
I'll say a few examples:
"I mean know harm" It should be no and not know
"weather she wanted to or not" Whether, not weather and it should be capitalized at the firs letter
I would go more into details, but I'd rather not for the sake of time consumption. But this story is interesting and unique, great job!
2754033 That is a bit confusing, but I can make senseof wo's child is who's.
But one thing is bugging me... Where is the *YAY* in this situation?! And why the buck was "male" censored?
2744020 I make tons of mistakes too, I started writing, my first story on Fimfiction, and I feel like I repeat words too much and make some careless errors. You are not alone in this valiant struggle to improve in your skills as an author, for you have found another. Me...
Tank you my friend, i appresiate you helping me.2804919
2805979No problem. I like to help people become better in any way I can!
