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Fuck
Damn fluttershy is a beast!
Ho. Ly. Shit.
One word: Editor.
Change the format; Make it so theres a line break in-between each dialogue.
1st Chapter I was like
after seeing way too many uncapitalizations
2nd Chapter:
Not much better. But Pinkie Pie 
I just had to continue. Poor Fluttershy 
3rd Chapter: Better.
Fav. and Liked. Now... to read the next chapter
2716350 ok thank you, im kinda new to this, i dont really do good with the new paragraphs with dialog but ill change it
sorry
2714987 what do you mean?
2717269 I mean that whole story was extremely creepy, awesome, and altogether fucking AMAZING!!!
Not stomach-friendly :c
more like mind=blown
You got Bad Ending replay to see the other ending
Also great story
ur just a smart ass arent u? I like the story, at least it's readable.
what happened to Rarity? she like vanished.....
It really needs a editor. Good story though!
....well fuck!
Well.... now we now that Fluttershy is unkillable.
I'm listening to the amnesia soundtrack while reading this, it adds to the dark atmoshere.
Aw COME ON!
2844947 whats wrong?
yep expected RD to be the raged one. pinkie being the crazy one makes sense but was REALLY surprised to not see Rarity not the heartbroken one. Also RD and Pinkie are suppose to be blind. you didn't mention the brute having his steel blade tho it appears he swings with it at AJ. Rarity just disappeared?
Hmm, so Flutters did become the heartbroken one after all tho she doesn't act like it. This story does have me hooked as someone who LOVES Amnesia.
One thing that bugged me was ...
I thought there wings were pretty much ripped out with nothing but bone left
oh dam! not expecting that at all. just cant kill Murdershy can you? this was an excellent story! I couldn't stop reading it. Another reason why AJ is my favorite pony (tho Fluttershy is still best pony).
weeks might have been a bit much. she never ate or drank or even slept other than when she blacked out. a week would have been more acceptable but pushing it still. So not only is Murdershy loose still, but all the other monsters are still capable of getting free
WELL SHIT!!! Great job good man!