Return of two evils

The main six need help and they pull six heroes from another universe to help them defeat Queen Chrysalis and the resurrected King Sombra.

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Deadlygamer

Deadlygamer #1 · May 29th, 2013 · · ·

first time hope it get posted

VX #2 · May 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Hey. You.

Don't rush things, one sentence the guy was in his home then the next in Equestria!

Know this: Rome wasn't built in a day, plan your time and how you want the story to appear. Don't be afraid to get a pre-reader to proofread it.

Now, with this knowledge hurry along the great plane of Equestria and seek out proof readers! Gods-speed.

Thaums

Thaums #3 · May 29th, 2013 · · ·

This is a joke right?
Right?

Thaums

Thaums #4 · May 29th, 2013 · 2 · ·

One night when I was sleeping I heard a voice it sounded faint I couldn’t make out what it was saying so I asked
“What did you say?”
but no response. This continued for a week or so, until I could make out what it said
“You need to gather five of your friends, once that is done I will contact you again.”

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Theater Critic

Theater Critic #5 · May 29th, 2013 · · ·

2648508

LOL

Commissar Rarity

Commissar Rarity #6 · May 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

>registered today
>overly designed black and red oc with skull cutie mark
>terrible HiE

Obvious troll.

Bonanuu

Bonanuu #7 · May 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

2648817 >Implying that everyone else is retarded and doesnt know this

Oh wait, they are, and they don't...

Theater Critic

Theater Critic #8 · May 29th, 2013 · · 7 ·

That was the most HORRID story I have ever read. And I have read others, like Element of Time, and My Immortal!

0/10

Thaums

Thaums #9 · May 30th, 2013 · 4 · ·

2649164
ITS TIME TO ENLIGHTEN YOU ON WHAT YOU FUCKED UP ON.

And I have read others, like Element of Time,

OH LOOK, YOU'RE USING YOUR OWN FAILED FIC AS AN EXAMPLE.

That was the most HORRID story I have ever read.

THEN YOU HAVEN'T READ A LOT OF STORIES

AND OH LOOK, YOU MADE YOUR OWN VIDEO TO EXPRESS YOUR HATE. HOW PATHETIC.

Seriously, you're being too unreasonable and asshole-ish. Why do you think everyone dislikes your "reviews?" Not because of "element of time," but because of what you say!

Now, I'm not saying you're an asshole, I'm saying you're an asshole. I'm just saying that you should be a little more nice. Don't just go "That story was HORRENDOUS!!! 0/10"

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