What would happen if Princess Celestia suddenly became ill with a severe flu? Who would raise the sun and rule in her absence? There is only one other pony who can--her sister Princess Luna! But does The Princess of the Night have what it takes to rule the day and manage all of the responsibilities that go with it?
Special thanks to my friend for helping me with editing. You can find the link to his profile here! http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Light+Guardian
Moar... Please.
What ever aren't they teaching in school now adays
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Probably the same material ever since school was invented
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If you liked this, just wait until you see what I have planned for chapter 2
*whispers:* spoiler alert, it involves an energy sword duel
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Eneh... Energy sword duel!?
Now I can't wait... Even more than before...
I wanted to find a video clip showing Adder from the Black Adder show shouting get on with it to show my impatience for the story to get on with the story, unfortunately you tube failed me.
Great work so far, but I'm glad we finally got to the start of the major plot line.
I'LL DO ALL OF YOUR HOMEWORK IF YOU PROMISE TO USE THAT TIME TO FINISH THE STORY.
although I ain't the smartest cookie
but still
...Not bad. Not bad at all. I request further installments. I believe the appropriate word to be "Moar."
So you spent two chapters on reenacting a video game... and don't actually have the story we want to read till chapter 3???
Might want to rethink your writing strategy.
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I'm sorry about that, and I agree with you. This story, and my first one (The Doctor's Visit) are not that well written. However, it is important to note that this was only my second fanfic and it was last written almost two years ago. Rest assured, my writing has improved since then; go read my other stories if you want to see for yourself! My most recent story is How I Met Your Mother! :3
Honestly, I'm thinking about canceling this story; I've hit an impassible wall. I started writing this story with very little preparation, and then an MLP comic was published where Luna had to lead for a whole day. Granted, the comic and my story have different plot devices (the sisters had a bet in the comic), but the comic and my story would've ended similarly. After the comic came out, I guess I became discouraged and stopped writing. Unless I get an idea soon, this story will most likely be cancelled.
Thank you for your input! And I assure you, I have only gone up since I first started writing!