1000 years has passed since Twilight first came to Ponyville, and Celestia and Luna have long-since retired, Twilight having been chosen to replace them as the new princess. She has chosen her own student, and has been teaching him as she had been taught. However, her friends had died long ago and 1000 years has caused her to become lonely and miss the antics of her friends. Her student, named Rune Sigilsign, sees her sadness and decides to go back in time to figure out a way to cheer her up. However, something went wrong. He finds himself in an unfamiliar version of his mentor's past, where her friend Rainbow Dash never completed her first Sonic Rainboom. What could this mean for the legend of the six Elements, and why is there an ominous feeling of doom spreading throughout the night?
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This is quite interesting waiting for next chappie
Much better than I anticipated. Good Job!
It's a very indulging story! Love it^
but i never knew Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash got their cutie marks shortly before the 1000th Summer Sun Celebration?? I always thought that Pinkamena Diane Pie was a lot younger too. I also know that Fluttershy is a year older than Pinkie. Oh and from Cutie Crusaders episode, Dash said she was the first in her class to get her cutie mark!?! I'm sooooo confused... 
If there are some canonical holes in the story i really don't care though.
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did you read the description of my story? it'd help with the stuff that you're confused on lol
209578 Ohhh okay, sorryz....
Thank you again though! 
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lol it's fine.
An interesting story so far. A bit confusing, as we don't know exactly what happened yet, but I expect that will be revealed in time. It's like a puzzle, the pieces slowly falling into place.
That said, my biggest criticism would probably be the lack of detailed descriptions. It feels like there's no real backdrop for the story. It's something I struggle with too, but it's important. Providing a good visual description can help to reader to imagine exactly what's going on.
My second criticism is that the dialog can be a bit stilted at time. We're four parts in and I still don't have a good grasp of what the main character is like, because he doesn't have a unique voice.
I think the plot has potential, but I personally feel that more detail could be used to flesh out the character's personalities and their environments.
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I have the entire storyline planned out, and the start of a sequel planned. I intend to go back and improve the story before moving on to the sequel, so eventually the chapters WILL have more details. consider this a rough draft version.
Aliens man, Aliens.
It is CuddleUppet by the way. :D
love how you incorporated g1 as deccendants of g4
more must have more of this.
first post!
soo i was just wondering, if this story is getting scrapped or your working on new chapters???
this sotry really deserves major love man its good.
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it's on hold while I work on my RPG project. Then it'll be rewritten.
cool as long as its not forgotten about,aka cancelled im happy this stories concept is rather interesting to read about.