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The Harmonic Oath

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It's been a long time since five of the Mane Six have died, leaving the Alicorn Twilight Sparkle. But now a new danger is in her midst, and without the rest of the Mane Six, how is she supposed to beat the enemy which only the Elements of Harmony can overcome?

Inspired by the wonderful cover art :)

Rated teen for language.

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oopsloops

oopsloops #1 · Jun 12th, 2013 · · 1 · R1: Harmony ·

I would just like to give you a tip when writing; i'm not saying your story was bad, it had a great storyline, but I would prefer if you didn't use any rude words like 'the big B.' Trust me, my stories suck, but I know good things!
*The sound of hoofsteps filled the room, as Twilight walked into the room.*
Try not to use the same word twice in a sentence, as you did near the start. Room and room; sounds strange to me.
Otherwise, I really like your story! Moustache for you! looking forward to more! You've got a new like!