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Illusion

His life isn't perfect. He isn't your average pony either. Being made in a laboratory can sure effect how he responds to his own existence. Will he be able to live a normal life, or be lost wondering forever?

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The Library

The Library #1 · May 15th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Hmm... This could be interesting.
Heh. I need to warm up on this story. BUT i will give you a fave and a thimbs up because i have high hopes for your story.

The Library

The Library #2 · May 15th, 2013 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Thumbs... Sorry

Sylpheed Dashstep

Sylpheed Dashstep #3 · Jun 21st, 2013 · · · Chapter 2 ·

"Your no fun!" The unicorn says.

I'm, uhh, not trying to be rude, but it should be,

"You're no fun!" The unicorn says.

Also, there were changes from present tense to past tense throughout it, but it was a good chapter and we can't wait for the next one!
~Sylpheed and Eli