Life is good and it is treating me good. There is nothing I love more than finding the wonders of the world. Now that high school is done, many other adventures await me. I walked down the street towards to home only to be disturbed by the scream coming from the other side of the street.
Note: If anyone has a picture they wouldn't mind me using as a cover image, please tell me.
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Bravo, indeed; this story is so smooth and relatable that I thoroughly enjoyed it. I can tell that you were feeling chill whilst you were writing this.
Just ONE probably insignificant detail that would make this perfect: utilizing semicolons when talking about a different subject in the same sentence. I've seen so many forget this wonderful symbol, as its potential is rarely touched.
Then again, who am I to talk? Just keep truckin'; I'll sure as hay follow you. :D
a great story so far, keep it up
That was beautiful! Does any of this relate to your life? Authors generally inject some of their experiences into their stories.
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Also, keep in mind spacing between paragraphs. If you copied the text over into the site's editor, it is possible some of the formats didn't carry over. Happens to me all the time.
2563232 I love the all-powerful semicolon!
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Thank you for bringing that up. I haven't noticed the formatting problem until now. I'm going to go fix it right now.