After a strange occurrence in the pony world, Jacob finds himself turn from human to pony over night. Will he ever be able to turn back into a human, or will he be a pony forever? Find out in this exiting story about Jacob's pony adventure!
After a strange occurrence in the pony world, Jacob finds himself turn from human to pony over night. Will he ever be able to turn back into a human, or will he be a pony forever? Find out in this exiting story about Jacob's pony adventure!
I am literally speachless
Is that a like, or a dislike?
Just ... NO.
What the fuck this story is ? o_O
It make no sense at all, it's full of stupidity and clichés and stupidiclichés ( yeah I have to invent words for this ).
There is no way in hell that Twilight KIDNAP and transform random peoples into pony ( and less than she's able to give them the choice of a race ); nor can she give them a name or any bullshit like this.
Well....... this is....... something.....
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Why does everypony hate my stories?
I actually thought I did a good job this time
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It's not that people hate this story, as much as this is too weird to like.
what how can you guys hate this story?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?! THIS STAORY ROCK I have favored and wathc it being updated IT'S AWSOME!!!!
Why did you delete so many comments?
You do NOT want me to go into full Berate Mode on you, friend. Either delete this story or rewrite it. You have been warned.
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How funny. You don't control me, nor do I fear you. Giggle at the ghostly, mother fucker
2620916 If you do not fear me, why indulge me in conversation? And with expletives, no less? Someone's a bit grumpy, eh?
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Once you have constant hate mail about a story you put lots of work into, come talk to me about grumpiness. Until then, shut up.
2620959 Work? Work? I'm seeing 8000 words of crap and 20 dislikes to go with it. You haven't stopped yet? Why continue on this? I've seen stories with less chapters and less words do much better than this.
Why didn't you pack up shop upon first glance of what was to come?
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Because all haters, and I mean ALL haters, are just kids with no lives and nothing better to do with yourself. I met a reader of mine awhile ago who was begging me for another chapter. I may have dislikes, but I also have favorites. Don't waste your breath, you don't make me feel threatened.
2626650 I am 20 years old and in college majoring in Computer Science with a minor in Literature. I have seen fics come by the truckload, i.e. Poor plotline, grammatical errors, pacing issues, etc.
I don't expect you to feel threatened. In all honesty, you're going to wake up in the morning, go to your part-time job at McDonalds, and not give a hoot about what I have to say.
Have you ever considered these "favorites" are but trolls? Either that or autistic people? I've seen numerous accounts of this in my travels around FanFiction and FiMFiction, so don't say that this is a silly idea.
Why not try to rewrite this, eh? Spit and shine a bit, your story might gleam a tad brighter, yes?
EDIT: Why did you place your story under Craptastic Stories if you say that this fic isn't all that bad? Food for thought...
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