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I must be brain damaged. I'd letter Fluttershy use the stare on me anytime.
Eh, it's fine.
slightly funnier than the first :)
Excellent work! I quite enjoyed the first chapter and the second chapter I'm all like, "...Umm...What."
A good story! Totally publish!
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Yeah I submitted so I can see if it gets featured, despite some inherent. . . "flaws" to the story.
Namely, I think I made Fluttershy too hot, and now everyone will be like "We want more humans in diapers!" and I won't be able to write the rest of the ponies.
copying a fic that was bad to begin with
yawn
The last story I read was the exact opposite of this.
My god, this guy is in trouble.
Oh, dear Lord, I can see this getting featured and becoming popular (as popular can be) very quickly...
I shall read later.
2532223 "We want more humans in diapers!"
Ok-What thu fu-? I don't even...
Now I have to read this story. Da fuq happens?!
They need some people to comfort these them after this ordeal.
Hell, us Cloppers would love this.
I shall read this, even though I find the whole rape thing a bit disturbing.
Would be kinda funny to see a rapid brony hater come across one of these Ponies.
Yeah sorry, all I could think of.
Yeah, this is surely something iloveportalz0rs would like. Really creepy at the end, and now I have weird head canon about what Fluttershy would do in a world she perceived as not having consequences. Though I suppose I will try and help get this featured. It would be funny to see side by side with the forced pony cuddles one (I forgot the actual title).
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You die of dehydration on the floor, Fluttershy inadvertently kills you.
this line started roaming trough my head when reading about diapers
This....This is bad on a level I never seen before. Where the hell did you come up with this shit?
Suddenly Fluttershy has the ability to program creatures to do as she says.
Also given the simple fact that she ruin this guy's life for a quick fuck and fantasy is...
Disgusting..
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Nope.
Just on the last half of this chapter, nope. That just...
Nope the fuck outta here, bro.
No, a true true friend is only five or six inches long, has a polymer grip, and is capable of spitting hot lead at speeds that exceed the sound barrier.
EDIT:
Holy st, don't tell me I'm the only one here who gets the Asimov's Laws of Robotics reference.
That's it, i'm done with ponies (for tonight).
That was plain fucking scary. Damn.
I'm out.
(on a sidenote, i lol'ed at the Asimov's laws of robotics reference.)
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You are not the only one I saw it too.
You know After the second half I fell the need for a stiff Drink.
I read this chapter and the last part made me go WTF.
Asimov's Laws of Robotics LOVE IT
You sure have some weird ideas for an ending.
Kinda messed up when you realize she pretty much just ruined some dudes life for shits and giggles
Holy shit...
Fluttershy is evil!
I mean she just ruined that guy for her own perverse pleasure! Even if it was accidental. She is going to be haunted by that for the rest of her natural life, and she deserves it!
bye bitch
God fucking damn it, warn a bitch next time it's got diaper play in it!
I don't mind if that's your thing - you cannot control what your heart or loins desires - but I'd really rather be warned when it exists.
EDIT: Who the fuck downvoted this? Seriously, it's fine if that's your thing but I don't particularly want to read it. I don't trick you into reading ... I dunno, gore sex porn. Or straight up foalcon. Or consensual sex in the missionary position.
Ok, that last one was a bit 'too far' but you get the idea.
I really hope the voice in the back of the head wants a cheeseburger stronger than the stare.
this reminds me of being john malkovich. gave me nightmares for weeks.
This was good up until the baby part.
Was it really necessary for fluttershy to ruin this guys life for shits and giggles?
The ending disgusts me.
someone read pattycakes before wrighting this.
Fluttershy is a special flavor of crazy
Yep, except my true true friend is about 4 feet long most of the time black and fires objects at the speed of sound into peoples heads
Fluttershy has officially creeped me out... i will never see her the same again.....
That was, by far, one of the strangest things I have ever read.
excuse me author, but would you kindly at least give a warning for unexpected (and unfavorable) turn of events like seriously
the ending was fucked up
WHAT
HEY YOU. YES YOU. I KNOW WHAT YOU DID THERE.
Kaidan's Four Laws of Raeponics.
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.......
..........
Um... what?
And... suddenly, Pattycakes.
That's... I just.... WHY
Infantilism is the kind of thing you really need to warn people about in your story description or in a notification at the beginning. Seriously, that kind of shit with no warning is not cool
Ellipsis has a point
going to be honest that kind of nauseating me
This was funny, but bordering creepy at the end lol.
DO NOT WANT!
Seriously, this was disturbing as hell.
+1 like
The baby part...why did you do it?! I reminded me of 1000 ways to die. ;n;
It was awesome though. Don't get me wrong!
Weirdest boner as of yet. Oh hullo there!
I think those rules were the 'Laws of Robotics' back when I had those robotics classes... Huh...
This was so disturbing it's funny
One of those times when I wish we had the ability to vote on individual chapters, rather than the whole fic. I'll keep reading, but the Pattycakes (*shudder*) reference has gotten a downvote from me. And I haven't even read that story.
The fuck did i just read?!?!?
Asimov's four laws of pony rape
2541485 Gotta love that Irobot reference
dafuq did I just read?
This was a bit cute for the beginning and then it turned downright creepy. How creepy you ask? As creepy as Pegacorn Ondacob (creator of the infamous "Pattycakes" series) creepy that's how! The ending also ended in a slightly disturbing note which leaves me and other fellow readers wondering the fat of the protagonist (either death, madness or being confined by police). But, all in all this was decently written, in dead on disturbing detail. ....Eeyup!