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The Jabberwocky


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The possibilities of the way this story intrigues me quite a bit. Def gonna keep my eye on it.

BEST CLIFFHANGER EVER.....
I'M GOING TO KILL YOU :pinkiecrazy:

I SHALL NOT GET OFF OF THIS WEBSITE UNTIL A NEW CHAPTER APPEARS!:pinkiecrazy:

You better finish this in the next chapter...or I will be mildly disappointed... you wont like me when im mildly disappointed. :pinkiecrazy:

>That cliffhanger

Oh come on!:raritydespair:
You tease.:ajsmug:

:flutterrage:wheres the next fucking chapter

You goddamn tease :twilightangry2:

I would strangle you for that cliffhanger if it didn't mean the next chapter would take more time

"Don't tease," She practically moaned.
As did the rest of the readers at the ponit of the cliffhanger.
YOU, DIABOLICAL AUTHOR, YOU

WOW this is some of the best written clop I have seen since Bronystories work! NICELY DONE!

I... Like what you're doing here. Very nice so far. Let's see if chapter two lives up to one.

I must have more. Even though this is painful to read. Vigilant is very much a mirror of myself. But trust me, sex has never helped. Even councilling doesn't help.

Nice.

Clop with a plot. (hur hur)

*eye twitch*:pinkiecrazy: I...need...:flutterrage:MOAR!!!:flutterrage:

holly shit this is quite dam emoshanl kotos to you for getting me to feel

Moar plox!

This story dead?

2714556
'tis not dead, for sooth it sleeps
for much has happened through these weeks
the jabberwocky may be slow
but he is a tenacious fellow

finally his story is getting updates again:pinkiesad2:

just when it get good, it fucking ends. GO FUCKING FIGURE:twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

why is in this story sex the same think as love?

why they no use magic to come over her needs? or at least low them down?

why they force twi to sex whit random guards? mayby she want a husband or coltfriend first?

what is, shiny says no or become jealously? would cady leave him for her own sexlife?

Just a faw thought of me...don´t take me wrong, your writing is pretty good and i still will read your story. Mayby I get some answers.

Oh come on, what a place to end a chapter. Such a tease.:raritydespair:

Good story otherwise, however.:raritystarry:

Alternate chapter title: "The Lustful Training of Twilight by Luna and Thunderhead: Observational Clopping."

Love Know

It was Love Knot a second ago..

This story is so well done :twilightsmile:

Hopefully it keeps going :twilightblush:

Very well done story, I cant wait for the next part. if you are stuck on how to continu Im more than willing to help.

Hey Jabby are you still among the living?

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