Meh, this show’s got some good stuff about it, but I’m not the biggest fan.
Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.
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Unfortunately, not every critique can fill up a thousand word blog post. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences each.
Hey there, authors! This is your old pal, Dark Avenger, bringing you another important lesson from the world of FimFiction. Some of you might already know me as the most pro-ass author among the most pro-ass authors, doing the best reviews and talking about good stuff in general. But for those of you living under a rock, let me introduce myself. I'm actually a true original professional expert author person who wrote like 420
I go into every story hoping for something that will be worth commenting at (great) length on. Unfortunately, not everything warrants prolonged critiquing. Here is a selection of reviews/critiques, in two sentences or less.
Some users may remember that one story I wrote about Nightmare Moon. You know, the one with the melodrama. Well, I'm happy to announce that Kitsune Heart has done a dramatic reading of it! Find it over here.
In my usual overanalysing way, I have written a critique of it. Read on for more.
Hi guys! I wanted to put out there that I am offering handmade thumbnails for stories, in exchange for editing and feedback help on my story. I'm a halfway decent artist and I have examples of my art which I will attach. If you're interested please PM me and we can talk!
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Critique: One thing to note about this story before we begin is that the story has to warn us that the author doesn’t condone the actions and that if any author has murderous impulses to seek help.
Fife: Gotta be a responsible author, I guess. “In this story, Fluttershy explodes twice. I do not condone exploding. If you feel like you’re going to explode, it sucks to be you.”
It's been a few weeks since the results of the first decennial Sunset Shimmer Shipping Contest. And although the results weren't that controversial—I've only yet seen one person accuse us of being biased and wrong—I know that there were loads of stories that deserve some recognition, if not simply to be talked about.
Becoming an effective, efficient author requires you to both master how to give inspiring criticism and how to take criticism without tearing yourself (or others) apart. In this blog entry, I will show you how.
One thing I like about the FIM fanfic fandom is the abundance of reviewers and critique available. It helps authors grow, helps other authors learn from their mistakes, and helps inform readers of stories they may like or dislike.
I generally avoided being one of those reviewers for a long time. I usually preferred a direct dialogue with the author, so my critique would often take the form of a lengthy comment directly on the story in question.
Today’s story uses not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is fairly obvious (perhaps intentionally so), I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.
Today’s critique is another “retro” one. It is an adaptation of a comment I already made, on a story I have already read, rather than completely new material based on a recent read.
The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.
I'm currently working on a third edited chapter for Feathered Heart, which I'm still hoping to be able to post here if I rewrite them enough--basically, that's what they're telling me I have to do in order to not run afoul of site rules. I have not started the next Firefly chapter yet, though I'm certainly thinking about it, and starting to feel some strong tugs back towards Midnight Rising as well.
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