An overwhelming reaction review of my story: Sweetie Belle Gains a Soul · 1:00pm Mar 14th, 2023
As you probably know, I've written a magnum opus:
Here's the big review of said novel:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1009730/story-review-19
As you probably know, I've written a magnum opus:
Here's the big review of said novel:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1009730/story-review-19
So I'm teaming up with my friend Jade Crossroads once again to write the sequel of Mistletoe Kiss called After The Mistletoe, it not 100% done yet but we are almost finished so why not tell you all that the sequel that all of no one asked for is coming soon-est it all matters on how lazy me and Jade are and I'm pretty lazy. But I'll make an blog post on when After The Mistletoe is up tagging Mistletoe Kiss so if you enjoy the first story I sure hope you enjoy the sequel.
Just a little something to show why I'm so bad at naming things with Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle: The Thousand Year Door.
Test Subjects, can you hear me? Congratulations! You are the world's first half-pony, half-machine police officer! Well, first batch. There was a pretty big shootout. Bought all your caracasses off the mayor.
(I was never a particularly funny individual, so I thought I'd post a micro-fic to see if anyone gets a kick out of it.)
I didn’t honestly think of it at the time. I didn’t think of Sweetie Belle’s quizzical look. The little blush on her cheeks. You have to understand, she was a SMART KID! I’m not saying I didn’t share some of the blame in this case, but Sweetie has always been clever enough to know when something was wrong.
I've been writing my novel for more than 2 years now. I wrote 47 chapters that are still unpublished. Then, this episode happened...
The episode is great and all. I can't really say anything bad about it, but it did hurt my novel a lot.
I don't want AU and I can't say that events take place in the past (for reasons in the novel).
Source: Forever Filly. Note how they are framed in such a way that they appear as equal as possible. Rarity is actually a lot taller than Sweetie, but this trick of the eye really drives the point home.
I came to this site 4 years ago with an idea for a story. The novel is now at the last polishing stages, and it's only a matter of time before new chapters are published.
The thing is, after 4 years, I still can't decide on the title.
Simple, brief, silly, anon suffering, adorable high pitched pony sister...what's not to love?
Heh, I'll bet a lot.
Expect another story tomorrow or Wednesday at this rate. Until then, enjoy, and hope you get a giggle.
Oh, and happy Australia day.
-Pencil
OMG! I have 100 reads on my story! Thank you guys so much!
It means so much to me that people are taking an interest in my story and I know that some people don't like the ship Scootabelle. I'm now currently looking for ideas for the story, as I have nothing yet and I am busy on the other website I use and updating stories on there.
I am also hoping to do more CMC ships in the future, and some Mane Six ships as well.
Once again,
THANK YOU!
So, I have a problem with the sequel to A Sweetie Dreamland, and this problem is named Sephiroth.
I haven't played FF7, but I know enough to know that I won't really be able to use Sephiroth during the events of the game.
Spoiler!
For all of you who have read Chapter 54: Revenge of the King of A Sweetie Dreamland, you discovered that Sweetie Belle can now sing to amplify her powers, called Soul Song. As you can guess, she will use Soul Song in the futur in some situations, which means that I will have to write lyrics. Yep, that's what I was talking about in my first blog.
Moved here since adjusting the chapter order over and over again was inefficient. Contains many spoilers for the League of Sweetie Belles, only read if you want context or have read all the chapters.
The League of Sweetie Belles
THE SWEETIE EXPEDITION CREW:
Cinder "Sweetie" Belle
Defining features: orange eyes.
Newest artwork about a Lesson Zero Sweetie Belle
Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle are about to learn that sometimes, the only way to save a friend is to betray his trust – no matter how much it might hurt.
In other words, it's time for the next chapter:
Time to start earning that that 'CMCs' tag
A scene from Chapter 2, and HLN-A's first arrival on Equus.
Created by: SkyPony
Thank you, Deity of a Shadow for bringing my novel to Youtube in the form of the dramatic reading:
I'm very impressed and grateful for your efforts. You did a great job!
Edit: Chapter 1 is now up as well:
Chapter 2:
The DeviantArt account where the images of Sweetie Belle's Soul forms were hosted has been deleted. As a result, the corresponding images in the chapter 119 of A Sweetie Dreamland are gone.
So if someone good enough at drawing could draw new ones for me, please...
The images are:
Unicorn Sweetie Belle Soul, with a body entirely made of her magic (so, green colored), flowing mane and tail, and glowing eyes.