You Can Fight FateTwilight discovers that the Elements of Harmony aren't as benevolent as she thought, and crosses time and space in order to stop themby Eakin
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1636673 I'm especially glad you thought the writing style was nice, because, as I said in the Author's Notes, I don't normally write like that. Instead, I write in 1st person (or pony), with looking at it as though the character is recollecting the memory, but it's actually happening at the time (it looks like past events, but it's currently happening). Either way though, I have a tough time writing filler, because my mind jumps from point to point, and I can only get down the action filled parts before I'm elsewhere. Looking back at the story though, it's almost laughable how Nightmare is, at one second, ready to take over completely, and then the next, she's apologizing. So yeah, I'm likely gonna edit the chapter over some time and then update it on here. So check back every so often :D
1635996 Yeah, I thought a little about putting it there, because the idea is a really good one in my opinion and your writing style is also nice, but a little thing bugged me, and now that you say it, some fillers would make it of course more awesome. Never the less, it was a nice story and enjoyable while reading
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of course, a friend recommented it and it was a really good story
Just not too sad for me to stop reading, so nice work and thanks for the story
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1636673 I'm especially glad you thought the writing style was nice, because, as I said in the Author's Notes, I don't normally write like that. Instead, I write in 1st person (or pony), with looking at it as though the character is recollecting the memory, but it's actually happening at the time (it looks like past events, but it's currently happening). Either way though, I have a tough time writing filler, because my mind jumps from point to point, and I can only get down the action filled parts before I'm elsewhere. Looking back at the story though, it's almost laughable how Nightmare is, at one second, ready to take over completely, and then the next, she's apologizing. So yeah, I'm likely gonna edit the chapter over some time and then update it on here. So check back every so often :D
1635996 Yeah, I thought a little about putting it there, because the idea is a really good one in my opinion and your writing style is also nice, but a little thing bugged me, and now that you say it, some fillers would make it of course more awesome.
Never the less, it was a nice story and enjoyable while reading