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Rainbow dash was given a place and time to break a new record, one she could call her own but when she reaches the conclusion she breaks form and is spit out into a world with strange animals called pokemon and a human quieter than fluttershy. What is rainbow going to do when her freedom, her sanity, her friends and even her colours are on the line?

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Comments ( 19 )

Interresting, will see where it goes.

2485588 LOL sorry you're story was really good and inspired me to make my own, Trust me It is much different in the whole story then yours, just some basic elements are currently like it. Sorry if I offended you in anyway, I do know what it's like when somebody steals your story. :twilightsheepish:

wait what is rainbow dash??? picture please??

2514899 i have to agree on that.
We need pictures!

2516155 i mean its obviously red... but, we dont know what dash is she, is either delibird or articuno

2514899 Ahh don't worry i'll tell you what she is, but currently she doesn't even know! trust me lots of detail is coming in the next bit! :derpytongue2:

2518759 *sighs* just dont god mod her new powers and were good

When will you post the next part???????
:flutterrage::trollestia::trixieshiftleft::twilightangry2::raritycry:

2549039 Soon my friend very soon. :moustache:

what da buck?? thats horrible red and professor oak would never do that im unsubscribing

I think Red is a little out of character here. But this seems good enough to stay with it.

2562264 I'm portraying them differently on the count that its supposed to make them look bad. there supposed to be cruel. Shes a hybrid talking pokemon whose misbehaving. Nobody ever mentioned how they study new pokemon and how they get them under control. So i'm suggesting that its most likely not the most friendly way.

2562812 agh still its really ooc for them

a suggestion, hit enter every time you switch between speakers

this is very hard to read...

continue or fluttershy will give you the stare! :yay::flutterrage::fluttershysad:

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